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haiku
by Vesna * Vanessa

Monday, February 13, 2006
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( Valentine's Day has a way of prompting me to try a Haiku..Do I dare call this a Haiku? )..OOPS!!


a blue night shimmers

unfolding goddess soars

this time burning with love


 

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi 3/22/2006
Exquisite! With great command of the form.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/5/2006
Well done, Vesna. The meaning and emotions shimmer through your haiku. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/14/2006
Beautiful!!

Happy Valentines Day!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 2/14/2006
Beautiful, absolutely.
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 2/13/2006
Passionate ku with equally passionate graphic. The hand fan compliments your line, "unfolding goddess soars"

And I'm sure you meant it to. Happy Valentine's Day, Vesna.


Sage


Reviewed by Sherry Heim 2/13/2006
oooooh!!! Haiku or not,(I say yep, it is a ku) this is smoldering!!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/13/2006
Warmth and passion ooze from this ku and it speaks to the heart from the first word as it plays on the romantic in all of us.

Felix
Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/13/2006
You convey great passion and intense feeling in this free haiku Vesna
You have all the tools in your creative box, to adapt successfully to any format
Peter
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/13/2006
Hmmm lets burn goddess burn...lol n shimmer too...
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/13/2006
Word association brings me to The Moody Blues - "K/Nights in White Satin"... have never figured out which, but both is good... like this free Ku, Vesna. A sense of an Aurora Borealis in the chilly Northern skies... lovely! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/13/2006
Love the passion of this one!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/13/2006
Beautifully done Vesna, yes it is a free Haiku
(as opposed to 757 count)A very lovely one!;-)

Eileen^
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/13/2006
Vesna,

I agree with Nordette...beautifully penned. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/13/2006
Vesna,

This is pretty; nice haiku! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 2/13/2006
I don't care what you call it; I call it wonderful. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Only A Poet 2/13/2006
so passionately warm and very beautiful, Lady Vesna.
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