One With Nature (For Kate Clifford's Challenge)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, February 14, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Let me light your night. :) Happy Valentine's Day!
The sun pulls dusk
over our heads;
we count the stars
as they rise, come
out one by one
on passion's heat.
You capture the
moon dancing on
my nipples with
and marvel as
the Northern Lights
move southward ... they
point the way home.
in the darkness;
the earth shudders
our pleasure and
we become one:
one with Nature.
This is the way
to spend the night.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Fabulous Karla....so soft and lush!
love and peace...Carole
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow wow wow this is hot stuff my little lady friend.
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Very passionate, excellent done,
happy V-Day, lots of love and hugs,
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Sizzle! Oh how intimately you allow the voyeur a glance and steal away to chance, etching the agony for an endless pause...
Peace and (((Hugs)))
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Gotta love dem dere nipples. LOL Sensuous and earthy combined with a touch of surrealism just for mystery. Gotta love it.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|This is an excellent response to Kate's challenge
Crafted with expert precision, and a delightful and romantic offering for St Valentine's Day Karla
This is a terrific beginning to my nightly reviews !
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|The music playing through the night.
Hows the moon do that?
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Wonderful write; yes, there is nothing like being one with nature! Wonderful write for this Valentine's Day; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Excellent!!!!!! To touch nature is to touch love :-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well done!!