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Under The Oaks
by E T Waldron
Wednesday, February 15, 2006
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wanka or wang'ka...from the Yip people of upper Bo...(no kidding ;-)


A wanka consists of 4 lines with a fixed 2-5-2-5 syllable pattern plus a detached final line which may be of any length though it is generally expected to be short. Can be done single or in chain like haiku...


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under
the awesome Oak trees
humbled
with admiration


eyes that see, but are blind, call them an accident!


listen
the wind is singing
through them
of their creation


Spirit wind speaks through leaves of Creator's Oak image!


etw-2006

creation

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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Beautiful done!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
This is so cool. I love the feeling
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Eileen,

Stunning pic only compliments these beautiful, magestic words; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Daddy update--STILL no surgery, he's developed a minor infection, pneumonia gone, delays, delays--driving us all crazy! Please, please continue to pray--thank you.
Reviewed by Steve Joos
This is an interesting style. You choose the right wrods to complete each thought to fit it. I don't know if I could do that.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
A beautiful and flowing style that works well with such a tranquil nature scene and poem. Great job...I never heard of this style before, but then, I never studied poetry, so there you go!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reads beautifully, and the picture is gorgeous. Reminds of the Allee of Oaks. Not familiar with the style, but love it.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Like the short forms, eh? Don't blame you, you do them (this) well. One more chance to shourt His message. Good.
Reviewed by George Carroll
You have this format down cold. Well done
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Andy a wanka is sister to the Tanka;-) sorry uk;-)lol
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Wacko Whaka-whaka Andy lost sometin....a nut musta hit him hard....lol!!!


Enjoyed this read...L O V E the pic!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Peter Paton
There are no accidents in our Universe, and your insightful and instructive words dispels this scientific myth, that everything is just random !
You bring Intelligent Design to the fore in truthful and forthright manner Eileen !
That is an awesome picture,I can visualize myself walking under that bower of magnificent oaks !
Love
Peter
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
I like this form. I'll have to give it a try. Thanks :-) I love being a student :-) Great thoughts!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
LOLOLOL. You can't say that. I'm on the floor with tears in me eyes.
The W word is one of our most vile of swear words. I can't see what i'm writing cos i'm laughing hysterically.
Bin Laden is one for sure.. Off to wipe me eyes...lolol
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