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Blazing Knight
by Vesna * Blueflame
Thursday, February 16, 2006
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Blazing Knight in craving heart I sense this early morn

as gentle thoughts kissed my mind though the dreams were gone

the caress of morning light just added to the pain

for deep within desire's fire offered now no gain


My Knight it seems is just a dream one I cannot keep

yet this forged intensity consumes me while I sleep

though life but brings only wounds and passion embers cold

I sense his presence in my heart which  my love does hold


For our time upon this earth is rapidly becoming short

and mighty battles will need end in this darkened court

one day our yearning hearts will sing as we in One do blend

but now the only course for us is for love to send


I cannot bear to see him ride into warring lands

and fear does grip my tender heart with its icy hands

a kiss I place upon his lips and touch his smiling face

his loving words my heart engulf and forever embrace


Blazing Knight in craving heart I sense this early morn

and gentle lips kissed mine own just before the dawn

 newborn bliss permeates my soul  ever  effusing love

for now I know my Knight and I have descended from above





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Reviewed by Leslie Bond 2/19/2009
very good poem with feelings of passion, and imagination! Leslie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/28/2006
A beautiful romantic offering, Vesna. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/24/2006
Nothing more sensual than a vulnerable Knight undone! Brings out all the woman in us, eh? This is tender and compassionate, Vesna, with feeling not only for the brave warrior, but for the beating heart beneath that armour. This is the stuff of true romantic valour. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 2/21/2006
So beautifully expressed, Blue!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 2/21/2006
Absolutely gorgeous verse.
Would you send that hunk in the picture my way?
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg 2/21/2006
"sigh" beautifully expressed
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 2/20/2006
A wonderful romantic write and a beautiful picture! We very much enjoyed it,
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 2/18/2006
Thnx Vesna for sharing this enlightening, romantic piece. I think Sage said everything I could, but I really like this. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by jude forese 2/17/2006
such polished imagery and beautiful sentiment rides within the heart of this wonderful poem ...
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 2/17/2006
Lovely write!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 2/16/2006
This is going to the Renaissance Fair in a dream! Jousting womanhood and manhood together as the lance becomes One flame Two impassioned. Enamoured write, Vesna! Could it be that you will find your Blazing Knight at a Renaissance Fair near your town come spring? Pick up an extra Turkey leg and Grog just in case!

Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/16/2006
You have such a firm grip on entwined forever love, it is beautiful to read and savor the prospects!A gem Vesna!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 2/16/2006
Dear Vesna,

The knight will blaze
and course the maze
till from the start
he finds your heart.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/16/2006
Brilliant write Vesna!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/16/2006
Magical and mystical with romance springing from a deep well some where deep within the poets heart. Well done.

Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/16/2006
Your shining knight is eternal and omnipotent Vesna !
This is a tour de force of a romantic write, that takes the breath away, and the picture is awesome.
This is a fabolous beginning to my afternoon reviews !
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/16/2006
Well, you have just penned the poem for all those whose loved ones must saddle up and ride away to do battle. And you did it very well, thank you.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 2/16/2006
Oh, dearest friend... this is one blazing masterpiece! I've read it and I know I'll feel enraptured by this beauty and the depth of feeling herein for a long time!
Reviewed by Only A Poet 2/16/2006
Lady Vesna, you weave such a wonderous spell with your words, always deeply touching.
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