|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|There is much substance to what you have shared via your verses, Sherry. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|The openess before the subject person in this poem, provides the opportunity to circumvent the damn thing. If there is a hole, it has a rim, and travel along the rim is recommended until one finds the way, and a reason, to leave that path and walk on another. You've given your readers a lot of salty meat to chew, but as a late comer to the reading of it, I say, from what I know of you to date, this ain't the girl I hear from and about freqquently; the encouraging one for the rest of us. C'mon, you know her well. Now, be good to yourself! - Bill
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|Without knowledge to feed the spirit
The mind is left to graze in unfertile soils
Well said, Sherry.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Good morning sis, and this is such a true poem. It seems we are all guilty of falling into the chasm of life, and that we want more, more, more. If people would take the time to walk in the park leisurely, and listen to the birds, and look at the beautiful flowers, and all that they are. Smell the fresh air, and just be happy that you are alive, this would be a very wonderful world.
Thnx for sharing sis.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom youlove, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|i'm glad i dropped by for my daily dose of wisdom. you got you some buddha/jesus eternal principle type love going on over here, sherry, and it is quite impressive! a great write, thank you for sharing it! now, if only the light were as attractive to the greedy soul as the darkness...|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Deep and quite profound. this is a masterpiece, Sherry.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Very telling.... ...and inspiring at the same time. Impressive and so very well written.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Excellent thought wave! Fantastic write.|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|With an outcome like this great poetry, who would further care which challenge you took, it is a wonderful result!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Very empathetic and "feely touchy" somehow, Sherry. I feel this is very much written through the hands and the mind of a "nurturer". I bet your garden is flourishing! :)) You have definitely found inspiration in the challenge, and leave the seed of such with us. Lovely, thank you. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Whahahaha...I did what you did booby...lol...seems like you and I did the same challenge with Tony...now I feel better about my booby!!
Well done Sherry.....;)....as Dr Phill always say.."what were you thinking????
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Very nice, Sherry! The last stanza says it all.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Well said, Sherry. And all this because curiosity lifted your thoughts!! Curiosity served you well! Bravo.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This has many pearls of wisdom enclosed in dynamic poetry; well done! Challenge met, and exceeded. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
You win my vote..reguardless of whether you followed directions or not! You always think outside the box which makes you more unique than most, and the words of wisdom are much needed in this day's society.
Another great write from you!
ps: home now, surgery went well.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet and deep thoughts filter through this one like sunlight through a just cleaned window. Wonderful entry to Bobbi's challenge regardless of which words used.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Love how you think; excellent reflections here! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Very insightful and instructive Sherry
You are a fount of knowledge and inate wisdom
This is the perfect start to my morning's reviews !
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Wisdom shines throughout this deep and meditative write.|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|This is a superb response to Bobbi's challenge and suffers not in lack of inspiration, for this is a truly inpsired and sagacious piece Sherry.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|outstanding work, Sherry! (thanx for the link ... luv the site)|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Twenty-four wise lines written with words from the lexicon of wisdom to compose "Chasm" and deliver a historical page to be read throughout the millennia.
I enjoyed the reading of "Chasm", and have learned through its lines of poetic sapience and artistic composition.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Sherry, directions are for rank amateurs or parents putting bicycles together on Christmas Eve...you have shown to the world of the Den that your intellect far outweighs that of any simple directions...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Never fear my dear, whatever the challenge, this poem is splendid ! One of your stellar writes with a wisdom bonus in the finale!