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Haiku (5/7/5): Determined
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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Don't have much time today, worn out from work. Fixing to turn in for the night. :)

Daddy update: he's feeling some better, pneumonia gone, white blood cell count down, heart tests showed nothing wrong there, may have surgery this weekend or early next week. Will keep you posted; thank you so much for your prayers!


first robins of spring
don't let a little cold snap
interrupt their song

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Felix Perry
Very bright and chipper poem that has a strong message to the rest of us. Hope your Dad is doing better my thoughts are with you.

Felix
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
This is a perfect haiku in every way, Karla! My highest compliment ... wish I'd written that!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by simply rita
Hello Karla, I'm simply rita, recommened to you by Cyn'tha read. I pleased to have been introduced to you through her. Thank you for your lovely comment with regard to my work. I look forward to reading from you and sending work to you. Take care, simply rita
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
beautiful, Karla...and good news~!

continued best wishes,
Gina
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
i like this
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Lovely Haiku, Karla.

Carmen
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
aww wonderful ku Karla!!

Your family is in my prayers!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Those robins are truly wise little creatures - and very lovely, as is your 'ku, Karla. And our thoughts and prayers for your father continue.
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Beautiful done. We are very relieved to hear that your Dad is doing better, we'll still keep you all in our prayers and close to our heart!
Lots of love and many hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Peter Paton
A delightful Ku, with a wonderful picture of a robin !
I have your Dad in my prayers Karla
Blessings
Peter
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Karla,

Wonderful write with the hope of things anew; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance
Keeping your dad in my prayers for you . I just went searching to find out what haiku means. I just learned this from Molly's site. I saw the 5/7/5 and the haiku should have a season in it.

Interesting. I don't understand it all yet, but you do have seventeen syllables....SO good for you, sha.*grin*

HUGS Karla~~~~~
Your Cajun Friend on this end.
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Fantastic haiku. Dad is in my prayers. Hope he will recover soon
Your brother abdi-noor
Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
:) lOOOOOOve it! good luck to your dad, he's in my prayers :) hugs and best wishes to all of you!! Danielle
Reviewed by E T Waldron
LOve it! Hope springs eternal!;-) Take care, new jobs take a lot out of you!Thanks for update!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Singing for the warmth to come.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
The robins know the secret :-) Great Haiku.....get it to a publisher!
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