|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
A true poetic accomplishment in a "Funny Carpet, Serious Magic".
Thank You for letting the world smell Your poetic flowers.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Oh this is good! Just magical and pure.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Luna has enchanted many a child...glad she bewitched you, too. Lovely write, filled with magic and with reality.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Nothing would surprise me when it comes to the moon. Love this write!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Climb a ladder if you have to, but get close
enough to really look. If you listen,
Marvelous, Phyllis - and I believe she truly does. This brought back many pleasant childhood memories for me when I would sneak up to our musty old attic with my dog and we would both marvel at her through our tiny window to the galaxy.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Enchanting writing Pea...love it!
love and peace...Carole
|Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
|Wow. This is vivid. I love it|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Nothing equals the love of fantasy of a child. This would simply be marvelous illustrated and given to your grandchildren, Pea. You should think about doing a small story book for them. It would be one of the most important legacies you could leave to them. "Read me a story, grandma," I can hear them say to you, Pea! Destined to become a fantasy classic collectible from the lovely poetess Pea.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|I concur with the board completely Pea !
This is simply enchanting and bewitching, and hurled me back to the innocent days of childhood, and the unimaginable workings of the imagination
I could also vizualize sitting on that roof conducting a private conversation with the Man in the Moon !
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|enchanting ...reminds me of how important it is to just believe (have printed it out to read to my little girl)|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|It sounds like an enjoyable portal too.
Fuel for the imagination.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You had me from the git go and had me entranced by your storytelling poetic ability. I became a kid again, wishing I had been there with you--stunning, magical work. Thank you! Saving this one, oh, yes, to travel when life is getting me down.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|What could we say that Felix and Tinka have not said! It is spectacular and the pic is lovely!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutely beautiful...love this!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Simply magical write here, Phylis, this is one of your best and one of the best I think i have read capturing the soul, heart and imagination of a child's mind. It made me want to be sitting there on that roof with the child looking at the moon and talking to the fairy as well. Great poem and the graphic compliments rather nicely.
|Reviewed by Kathy Kubik
|This is beautiful and magical. It brought me back to when I was a young girl and believed in wishes and falling stars - I wanted to go back to that place. This is lovely beyond words, I've saved it to read again and again. Thank you for this.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|Thank you for sharing a charming piece that I thoroughly enjoyed reading...this is a keeper. Peace and blessings. Mikii|