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Haiku: Rude Awakening
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, February 27, 2006
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This happened the other morning. :)

thunder disturbs
morning slumber
with wake up call

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	3/1/2006

Sounds like my hubbies voice...always like thunder...and make you hop outa bed with a "Yes Sir" additude..lols!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	2/27/2006

nicely done!




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	2/27/2006

Karla, Wonderful ku; you are so good at these! Keep them coming; very well done! Take a bow; you deserve it! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by E T Waldron	2/27/2006

Love this , and leave it to Ed M. to try to improve upon it;-) hahaha Wonderful ku Karla! eT




Reviewed by Peter Paton	2/27/2006

I love thunder and lightning as you do Karla, especially the breathtaking sheet and forked lightning on a warm summer's night, which lights up the skies in spectacular design Super Ku expresses the majesty and power of Mother Nature I'm glad you and Karen have re-adjusted to the pace of your dish washing, and are now in the swim of things !! I'm still praying for your Daddy's full recovery to full fitness ! Fabolous graphic Love and Blessings Peter




Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy	2/27/2006

When I was a little girl my grandmother used to tell me that thunder was the angels bowling. This is a finely crafted slice of life. Well done. Sweet dreams, Karla Bobbi




Reviewed by Kate Burnside	2/27/2006

... but at least, I hope, not in the shape of a husband's fist slamming into you while you both sleep. After years of sharing a bed with a "violent sleeper", think a rumble of thunder sounds a lot more gentle! Hmmmm... still a "growl" rather than a "purr" though perhaps, right? Unless your cute little kitty was sleeping curled up right next to your face instead? Well, I can hope, can't I??!! :)) Did Thunder then send Lightning to shine the torch in your eyes to make sure the job got done?? Neat and succinct. Kate xx




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	2/27/2006

I sleep right through, for the most part, any storm...although Rufuz does not and usually ends up in bed with me...Ed




Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher	2/27/2006

Brrrrr. But, the picturer is great, as is the write! Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger




Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers	2/27/2006

Yes, it woke me up at 3:30 a.m., if we didn't need the rain so very badly I think I may have been angry over my loss of sleep. We aren't suppose to have thunder and lightning in February..or January either as far as that goes but we did. It worries me how destructive the normal storm season may turn out to be this year. We've recently broken many weather records..I hope that won't be one of them. The sun is shining and is suppose to for the next several days...the temps are climbing almost to 80 by mid-week...we best enjoy it while we can...it's just liable to be snowing next week! Have a Good Day Karla! Lisa




Reviewed by Lynn Barry	2/27/2006

Short and powerful...I love it! :)




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	2/27/2006

There are far worse ways to be woken, Karla - Mother Nature was beckoning you!

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