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Haiku: Early Morning Poets
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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Submitted for a haiku contest, the original and a revision.


gulls write poems
in calligraphy on
golden parchment


(REVISION)

golden parchment -
calligraphic tracings by
morning poets

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 
 

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
You are damn good....brilliant yet again...I cannot wtir ku's to safe my butt...I talk too much...trying to find the right word to express myself!!!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Wonderful! Love them both Karla!
Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
lovely
Reviewed by john zimmerman
k.j.,


good ku -- i prefer the rewrite -- well done

john+
Reviewed by Peter Paton
They are both endearing and evocative haikus Karla, and my personal favorite is the revision !
I always come away from your Den inspired and refreshed
Peter
Reviewed by Felix Perry
I love both vesions please don't make me choose.

Feix
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Hey Karla..this is really good..I don't think I'll ever be able to write a flamen Ku as it should be written..sigh..LOL

But you do a great job of it!! YAY!!

Lovely!


vesna:)
Reviewed by George Carroll
Brevity at its best.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
I enjoyed both of them. My favorite one is your revision but I have to say both are strong!
Reviewed by Only A Poet
i like this very much Lady Karla, very classic feel to it.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Karla~

Haiku perfection! BRAVA; take a bow!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I hope you're collecting these for a book!
Beautiful work Karla!

eT
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Beautiful, words and picture!
Love adn hugs, Birgit and Roger
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