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by Danielle Mundy

Tuesday, February 28, 2006
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odd odd my head, had to write it...little depressed today :(

Velvet blackness pressing in
encasing me in steel bands of fear
feeling small, helpless and obsolete
the walls of this tomb draw ever near
breath drawn in fleeting gasps
must and rot permeating the air
trapped in this opressive dungeon
eyes glazing in an open stare
paralysis takes me slowly
draining my determination to fight
suffocating to their maniacal laughter
succumbing to the lunacy of the night

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Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 3/7/2006
Dear Danielle
May your determination always prevail!
Love & friendship Suzie xox :-)
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 3/3/2006
Excellent expression of that caged feeling, Danielle! It screams of longing for sunshine...or at least for music...

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 3/3/2006
Great write Danielle
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/1/2006
Ditto Eileen.... very good!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/28/2006
You gave me claustrophobia with this one Danielle! Hope you are alright. Keeping you in prayer! Fantastic poem!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason 2/28/2006
Breathe... breathe.

This is darkly wonderful, and imparts your feeling of depression perfectly. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 2/28/2006
This is an excellent write, had to open the windows now to feel 'free'!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/28/2006

A tight, claustrophobic feel to this excellent write. Well done! *shivers*

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 2/28/2006

Beauty and knowledge mingled in the poemization of "Asphyxia" - and art abounds in this magnificent composition in major art to enrich THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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