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Haiku: Crooked Path
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tuesday, February 28, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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a bee flies
crookedly when burdened
with pollen

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Janet Bellinger 3/2/2006
and don't we all. Great poem, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/1/2006
Yip spoton!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/28/2006

Adorable write; very well done! Love the picture; it suits the poem to a "Bee"! Er, I meant "T"! LOL Brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

A buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzilicious write! :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/28/2006
hahaha too cute! Karla kU!;-)

Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/28/2006
A bee flies drunk and inebriated with pollen...lols
Usually they have to zig zag home like a worse for the wear driver !
Clever haiku Karla
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 2/28/2006
Reminds us of our neighbors toddler, when she's burdened with her mom's purse. Sweet write,
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/28/2006
Yes this is so true and one can so easily see where you make the jump between the bee and us, we struggle so hard in this world to accumulate wealth and possessions that we also more then once end up on a crooked path before finding our way home to what is right.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/28/2006
A busy bee's work is just never done.
Reviewed by George Carroll 2/28/2006
Astute observation on the busy bee.

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