We try Diamante Poetry
Entertaining, Sporting, Thrilling
MINE, dirtbike - fourwheeler WANT
Entertaining, Sporting, Thrilling,
Running, Leaping, Swimming,
Pup, DOG - HORSE, Yearling
Galloping, Running, Trolloping,
Running, Clawing, Jumping
GIRL, fullgrown -puppy, BOY
Licking, Running, Sliding,
Giving, Sharing, Loving,
Church, SCHOOL - SCHOOL, Alley
Hurting, Lying, Bullying
Running, Playing, Jumping
BOY, nephew - brother, BOY
Running, Skipping, Hiking
Running, Bucking, Galloping
Grass BARN - FARM Hay
Chewing, Running, Bucking
4TH GRADE LIMERICKS
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|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Extra fine write . . . enjoyed this very much!!
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|I'm sorry I missed all of your work until today. It makes me happy. Great job on the diemante poems!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Enjoyed each read and thanks again for the sharing of these children's written work. I'll have to give this form a try. Could you send me the rules for it?|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I'm not familiar with Dimante poetry, but it sounds like fun! Love this! Thank you Molly!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Thanx Molly for this lighthearted take. I agree with Pea, what happened in the alley, wasn't fun for the one being bullied and beaten up. I did like this tho.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Penny Clark Babson
|I just love these thye are wonderful.
I noticed also that you have had things Published by Publish America! My first books were done there now i have moved on to bigger things. great to meet another PA author. I really enjoyed all of your work here :)
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|What fun! So imaginative!! What happened in the alley
wasn't fun, but. . .this is great, m.j. !! Hit me again! Then take
me for a ride. Bike, horse, I don't care. How 'bout both? 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|It is unique and looks like fun.
Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The diamante is an interesting style of poetry. I remember teaching it to my grade eight English students. Fun stuff! Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|I like This creative
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Delightful collection, Molly! Filled with energy and fun.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Tell them this is great stuff. Made me want to be a child again.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Great poetry, kids!!|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This is so cool!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Each one a gem on it's own...well done BOYS!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|each poem is excellent ... i particularly like "Friends"
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Lets see, these kids are only but 9 years old...? And they can do forms I never even heard of, let alone do myself...;) Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You continue to inspire budding poets with these challenging forms, but your students soar! Excellently penned, please tell your young charges to take a bow, they've earned it! APPLAUSE!!!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I have never heard of diamente style poetry, but these youngsters sure have a knack at it! Very well done; bravo and brava to the future literary legends!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
|I love Madison's poem! That one really jumps out at me|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I'm so delighted to read such great poems from all of you! What a cool bunch you must be!;-) All are very dynamic and excellent work!
|Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
|It's beautiful. Such poetic imagination out of uncluttered minds.
"I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat," said Edgar Allan Poe. I wished I could think and write like a child.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|This was a fun read! Excellent,
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Wow! Really like all of these, guys - can't pick a favorite here - keep writing!|