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Lost In Translation
by Kate Burnside

Wednesday, March 01, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Ain't Muses just the darndest things?? I wanted to do this all kind of oblique, edgey and mysterious... and all I got was more gamboling rhyme - hence the title!! :))

Anyways, my parting shot, a poetic "Mwah" to wish you all much comfort, peace and shelter while I'm gone.

Hasta luego, muchos besos ~ Kate xx



LOST IN TRANSLATION


A Chinese whisper,
the hint of a dream

Fabric of another world -
things not being what they seem

The life of the spirit,
a token of prayer

The kiss of communion -
knowing someone is there

Soft shelter of love,
the hope to take flight

Sweet breath of a sigh
that comforts the night

Sleek shaft of an arrow
dispelling all fears:

just when you need one
a feather appears!




xxooxx Kherubic Kate!! :))  

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Reviewed by A PAX 4/4/2006
Do angels hear us on a different frequency? I imagine they have abilities that we do not possess. They do have so many more responsibilities than us mortals. Can a sigh speak volumes.....I think yes, when caught by the right ear..........
This is a dreamy heavenly wrie Kate, it flows like a blanket of peace, and I hope with all my heart, that you are feeling peaceful now....my condolences to you and yours..........
Love your new profile pic...........
Its wonderful
all the best...........pax Anita :)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 3/8/2006
This is a wonderful poem, Kate. You have created a mood, and allowed the images to evolve and devolve magically.

D
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 3/7/2006
I left those two swan feathers under your pillows for this very reason. Away with all of your fears, sweet Kate. Blessed Be.

Sage
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 3/7/2006
Could that feather, perhaps, be that of an Angel? I like the rhythm and rhyme of this one Kate.

Blessings of Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/4/2006
Such a beautiful gift that you have offered, Kate. Thank you. Best wishes to you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Aberjhani 3/3/2006
LOST IN TRANSLATION but found in excellence. These lines fall over the reader like a silk net of hushed urgencies and luminous threads. Love the feel and the sound and the sense they make.
Aberjhani
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 3/3/2006
Awstricken by this pen. Your quality keeps rising. Great work
Reviewed by Sandy Knauer 3/1/2006
Very nice, Kate. I wonder if everyone built up to a soft sigh with this line: Sweet breath of a sigh
that comforts the night
If you didn't carefully plan that, your natural talent is amazing. If you did carefully plan that, I'm envious. Beautiful job.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 3/1/2006
Nothing lost in the translation here, Kate, this is outstanding!. I hope you have a wonderfully sunny and refreshingly restful vacation. Catch ya on the flip-flop..wish I was going along...Have a safe trip, we'll miss you 'till you return.
Sherry
Reviewed by jude forese 3/1/2006
beautiful ambiance, Kate ... have a smooth and inspired trip ;)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/1/2006
Kate,

I enjoy all that you do; I understand clearly of the things you choose to write about! I hope you have fun on your vacation; I wish I were going! I need to get away!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Have fun and stay safe!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/1/2006
Kate,

Your poetry is never lost in translation; it soars! Have a great vacation, have fun, get some much needed rest...and know you're in a lot of people's thoughts. Will miss you while your gone...wish I were going with you!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/1/2006
Sweet write from a sweet lady, enjoy your trip but hurry back I will miss ya.

Felix
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 3/1/2006
hey feather girl. have some fun while you're gone. nothing lost in translation on this sending-off poem, Dawn
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/1/2006
Beautiful Kate...just beautiful!!

I will be good I promise.......................I hope..lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Peter Paton 3/1/2006
This is so comforting and reassuring in its efficaciousness Kate
Embroidered with beautiful aliteration and meter, this couplet gets to the heart of the matter
Enjoy your break, and come back re-energised and enthuisiastic
Peter
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/1/2006
Lovely poem, not to worry your feather speaks volumes;-)
gozar del mar

eT
Reviewed by Janet Parker 3/1/2006
Your muse knows what it's doing, Kate ;>) This is so light and beautiful. xxxooo Janet
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 3/1/2006
It is beautiful!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/1/2006
Whatever you write is always marvelous to me.



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