|Reviewed by A PAX
|Do angels hear us on a different frequency? I imagine they have abilities that we do not possess. They do have so many more responsibilities than us mortals. Can a sigh speak volumes.....I think yes, when caught by the right ear..........
This is a dreamy heavenly wrie Kate, it flows like a blanket of peace, and I hope with all my heart, that you are feeling peaceful now....my condolences to you and yours..........
Love your new profile pic...........
all the best...........pax Anita :)
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar
|This is a wonderful poem, Kate. You have created a mood, and allowed the images to evolve and devolve magically.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|I left those two swan feathers under your pillows for this very reason. Away with all of your fears, sweet Kate. Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Could that feather, perhaps, be that of an Angel? I like the rhythm and rhyme of this one Kate.
Blessings of Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such a beautiful gift that you have offered, Kate. Thank you. Best wishes to you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|LOST IN TRANSLATION but found in excellence. These lines fall over the reader like a silk net of hushed urgencies and luminous threads. Love the feel and the sound and the sense they make.
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Awstricken by this pen. Your quality keeps rising. Great work|
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|Very nice, Kate. I wonder if everyone built up to a soft sigh with this line: Sweet breath of a sigh
that comforts the night
If you didn't carefully plan that, your natural talent is amazing. If you did carefully plan that, I'm envious. Beautiful job.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Nothing lost in the translation here, Kate, this is outstanding!. I hope you have a wonderfully sunny and refreshingly restful vacation. Catch ya on the flip-flop..wish I was going along...Have a safe trip, we'll miss you 'till you return.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|beautiful ambiance, Kate ... have a smooth and inspired trip ;)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I enjoy all that you do; I understand clearly of the things you choose to write about! I hope you have fun on your vacation; I wish I were going! I need to get away!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Have fun and stay safe!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Your poetry is never lost in translation; it soars! Have a great vacation, have fun, get some much needed rest...and know you're in a lot of people's thoughts. Will miss you while your gone...wish I were going with you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet write from a sweet lady, enjoy your trip but hurry back I will miss ya.
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|hey feather girl. have some fun while you're gone. nothing lost in translation on this sending-off poem, Dawn|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful Kate...just beautiful!!
I will be good I promise.......................I hope..lol!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|This is so comforting and reassuring in its efficaciousness Kate
Embroidered with beautiful aliteration and meter, this couplet gets to the heart of the matter
Enjoy your break, and come back re-energised and enthuisiastic
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lovely poem, not to worry your feather speaks volumes;-)
gozar del mar
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Your muse knows what it's doing, Kate ;>) This is so light and beautiful. xxxooo Janet|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|It is beautiful!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Whatever you write is always marvelous to me.|