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I had to put this up;-) Pic in my kitchen taken with my old polaroid of Daffodils bloomed almost all at once like one of those speeded up movie shots;-)
Poem is just for fun the way I felt...
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"Hello" said the stunning Daffodils
As they bloomed right before my eyes
"Oh, you are so delightful" I beamed
"We are glad to be in your happy kitchen"
"Not as glad as I am to have you, you bring the sun in to dispel the clouds"
"Thank you sweet lady, may we have some more water please, it took a big swallow to bloom for you?"
"Well I never knew flowers to be so polite and to think some call you daffy!"
"You are so kind I hope we can be with you for awhile, we usually don't last long you know"
"Let's not think of that just now, you are so beautiful, I can only think of good things"
"Okay, but it's not a bad thing we die to make way for new ones and each bloom is from our family so we continue into infinity"
"I'll be darned, I never thought of it that way what a wonderful way to look at it."
"It's the way Creator imprinted it in us to be,isn't that fantastic?"
"You bet it is, and I think there are so many things we have yet to learn. Thats what makes it all so interesting ,bloom on sweet daffodils! "
eT
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/2/2006 |
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| bloom on sweet Eileen, you sure are interesting |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/2/2006 |
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Awwwww damn power did not allow my comment to go through!!
Lovely write and a very neat kitchen Eileen!!
Geeee mine looks like a dishwasher 75% of the day!!
Kids makes a never ending mess!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Janet Parker |
3/2/2006 |
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| Hummm. Talking Daffodils, Eileen? Well, you just go ahead with the nice men in the white coats. They'll take reeeaaaal good care of you ;>) Just kidding!!! Great poem filled with words to lift the mood. Whimsical and happy. Have a wonderful day, Eileen xxxxooo Janet |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/2/2006 |
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| They'll probably stick around longer now that you're talking to them, Tiger Lily! |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
3/2/2006 |
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Beautiful poem. God has based everything on knowledge wisdom and logic. Many in this world have no eyes, ears or hearts to detect the the power of the creator through situations affecting their daily life. Thanks and GBQ
Abdi-Noor |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
3/1/2006 |
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Reminds me of a bed and breakfast round-table discussion about a man who sat under apple trees. Winds blew and apples fell on his head. Then one day, an apple fell on a certain man's head. He asked a big question. That man's name was Isaac Newton. "Why did that apple go down and not up? Why did it fall and not rise like a feather in the wind? Creative thinking just like this poem, Eileen. Curiosity is the mother of creativity. Creator says you can play it alone, however it is far more dynamic, like the abundance of daffodils, if you will get together and bloom all in a bunch!
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/1/2006 |
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A cute poem, Eileen, that describes the cycle of life.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
3/1/2006 |
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| I love daffodils...and your poem gave me such a thrill. They are sunny, sweet and the posterchild of Spring. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
3/1/2006 |
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So beautiful, this is such a wonderful promise of sunshine! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
3/1/2006 |
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| Bloom on dear Eileen, your poetry as beautiful as the blooming of daffodils...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
3/1/2006 |
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Very cute poem, Eileen...if only our plants could talk, eh? Mine would probably be yelling at me most of the winter because I am lazy about watering then.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/1/2006 |
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Eileen,
Wonderful, quirky, humorous poem; enjoyed!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/1/2006 |
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| Ingenious. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/1/2006 |
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No, daffodils aren't daffy; I just think I am at times! LOL
But SERIOUSLY, Eileen, this is a delightful write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/1/2006 |
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I sense an energy shift in this humourous daffy poem Eileen
Spring manifestations are all around us, early flowering shrubs like forsythia are blooming gorgeous yellow, the wood pigeons are cooing mellifluously in the monkey puzzle trees, and the crocus and snowdrop bulbs are pushing up through the ground !
Creator teaches us new tricks every day to learn and apply !
Peter |
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