by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Thursday, March 02, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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No use suffering when you don't have too.
I'm tired as ell,
but my mind feels well.
but my brain isn't sagging.
All day I ran from trouble,
reserved my energy to double.
Being tired and acting like a fool,
really attracts the devils drool.
Can't help the overworked cells,
but we can control the minds trails.
Where the brain goes,
can be put on froze.
Freezing out stupidity and hate,
the brain can better relate.
When the brain better relates,
pain and suffering less dictates.
Under the love letter,
we purely breath better.
Love resides under a big tent,
cost a lot less than hates rent.
Cause if you're hating,
you should be renting.
No one in their right mind,
would purchase hate.
Use it awhile,
let it go!
Purchase love for good,
it enhances a better mood.
I only rent suffering,
cause I'm forced by the devil.
Every chance I get,
I try not to pay the rent.
I'm looking forward to getting evicted,
have my suffering forever restricted.
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|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|I'm enjoying reading your poems so much. Just came across your site and shall return again. Meanwhile, Keep writing!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well smack that damn devil across the head.
Meds make you have fatigue too.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Didn't read this before, but now I'm reading it. Hope you had pulled through this one.
Lots of love,
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Stephanie Sawyer
|I love your message.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Have been wonderin' about you..are you okay?? You are in my prayers!
Wonderful write, impeccable rhyme! Very well done; take a bow, my friend!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
My book is due out in June the way things look now! :)