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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Brilliant! The feel of of your unease is palpable.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thanks for sharing...you nailed this one Susan!!
And Rage said it the best "The veil of infinite sadness that sometimes almost chokes our hearts is difficult to remove"
|Reviewed by . ignis
|The veil of infinite sadness that sometimes almost chokes our hearts is difficult to remove. But once it is, we are capable of seeing with our minds what has been hidden for our eyes. It takes time, often a period in which the hurting slowly fades and in that period we cannot help but writing poems such as these.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You express a universal theme (dilemma), Susan. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|We live in a world where everyone is out to do the other, there are no longer any rules or morals to hold the game in check anymore, and as such we have two choices, either retreat into a " Fortress Mentality ", or go all out single mindedly for your dreams and objectives, rolling over the dissapointments and discouragements in life.
I personally favor the latter Susan !
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a "Susan special" So beautifully written a joy to read.
The topic is a troubled one we all have to face now and then.
You covered it perfectly!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You capture, clearly, cleverly, the internal struggle with discontent. And in rhyme, no less...well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.