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|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Ah, you should title this "Confession of a Soul"
Really a good read.
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|ah, dammit, my friend...
seeking always and
yes, if we only knew, but we cannot as you, we can only feel enough to want to salve and soothe, perhaps...
and one, any one can only know one's own, ah, one's own truest pain and secrets sso dug within...
I, this...this piece, well...ohhh, I
you have been through
seen so much,
done and done again,
cheated death and you keep rising
yet looking inside always and up, up, praying for the salvation you seek and oh, to learn to forgive oneself, you see, now that is /would be such a Blessing...
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Romantic, repenting, restoring soul, "3 part" glows.
Glad to read this poetic flower from the Poet's garden.
Long Healthy Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I like the way this one tumbles down and ends in a blob....much enjoyed!!
How are you doing after your accident????