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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
3/9/2006 |
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Great team work and a wonderful picture!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
3/9/2006 |
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Beautiful write you two, very inspiring!
love and peace, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/9/2006 |
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Embrace the goal
. . . Of reaching the summit.
You two embrace it well.
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/9/2006 |
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a bit of a departure foryou,
well realized
a strong evocatice statement
good write
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
3/8/2006 |
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I like this poem best when I read the lines with the elipses separately, as if there are two poems here. Which makes sense as two people worked on it.
It is definitely better to crawl, than sit and complain about, if only if. And it is better to ride in the cool shadows, unseen, than be out in the open, where you can be easy prey to vultures. Thought provoking poem .
~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/8/2006 |
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Now this is one hell of a write Tinka and it captures life and the struggle to reach life's summit so well. You outdid yourself on this one, the words, phrases, lines and paragraphs flow together to create a masterful dialogue. Well Done.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
3/8/2006 |
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| lovely work |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/8/2006 |
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I agree with you Tinky and Dennis another
great collaboration, another gem! I am
reaching the summit one way or another. ;) |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/8/2006 |
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| Always reaching beyond your fear! Love your collabs, you two! |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
3/8/2006 |
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| Exquisitely conceived and splendidly executed. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/8/2006 |
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Super motivating poem with uplifting thoughts that spur us to climb ever higher! Well done as always Tinka and Dennis!
eT |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/8/2006 |
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Inspiring and uplifting write, Tinka; very beautifully done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/8/2006 |
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| Hey! Hey! Hey! You cooking today, Tinka. Wonderful wordplay and positive attitude, keep it up!!! |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
3/8/2006 |
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| beautiful write Lady Tinka, enjoyed. hopeful and uplifting. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/8/2006 |
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This insightful collaboration exhorts us to always strive for our goals and objectives in life, and to surmount the discouragement and darkness that stands in our way !
You's weave an inspiring and intelligent design here Tinks
Love
Peter |
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| Reviewed by M Wood |
3/8/2006 |
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| We climb a never ending slope destined to reach beyond ourselves to that which only the future can hold |
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