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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/9/2006 |
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Now that's pure passion with a mystery twist!
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/9/2006 |
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Absolutely great!!
Lol To Felix!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kenny Moon |
3/9/2006 |
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i just watched a film called Serendipity and there was a man advised about soulmates, that Destiny and fate are all very well, but you gotta do the real work. I thought it was a sign of maturity in the character. Go to work, Susan, and make it happen, whoever the Knight may be.... but hey, I'm the hermit in the forest, what do I know? :-))
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
3/8/2006 |
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Mysteries aren't always what they've become by choice. Existence outside of the scope of perception of most with one foot in other realms and the other still anchored in this place and time is what it obviously leads to, which may be clear even to those who do not share a similar fate. Destiny may have become less enigmatic, though still lightyears beyond their wit. Mysteries' path through space and time tend to remove them further away from where they once were, only to be unraveled by those who follow similar paths. Their destiny may not yet be entirely clear, but the direction in which they must travel is.
RAge
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/8/2006 |
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Nicely done indeed, Susan. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
3/8/2006 |
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Dear Susan
This is thoroughly great! I love "Oh man of no real name"
and "Sweet man of night dream's mystery"
"Whomever you are, Destiny?" Fantastic!
I guess we're left to celebrate the mystery!
Love & kinship Suzie ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/8/2006 |
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Lols, at Felix's comments below....:)
You light up the Den tonite with this impassioned and feverish plea
Reminded me of Ole Blue Eyes , Strangers in the Night....
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/8/2006 |
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Oh Susan this is hot and if you are looking for a stranger just pretend I didn't tell you my name and I'm yours for a poem. LOL good write.
Felix |
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