I Can Touch You There
by Lisa Hilbers
Thursday, March 09, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I Can Touch You There
Closed eyes; Shutters protect; Peace;
my place of understanding-
Oh I can touch you there; With fingertips
wet with desire and humid emotions-
Heat from your body drenches me like rain;
Allowing me; Only me; to drink from your vein
of riches in this life
Oh how I’ve missed you; I’ve missed your slow
hot breath tingling down the back of my neck-
The sparkled glow in your eyes, as I undress
Your naughty smile; and the moans of our time
Oh yes I can touch you there-
Oh how I’ve missed you; I’ve missed tracing your
lips; Nibbling slightly; Feeding my starved soul from
the embers of your fiery passions-
Feeling your arms about my waiste; and the
closeness only two lovers share-
I’ve missed fading into the sunrises of the newest
and the sunsets of passing days-
Oh yes, I can touch you there- Oh I can touch you there
Closed eyes; Protecting me; Holding you;
Bringing you back to me for another kiss-
Oh how I’ve missed you- Oh how I’ve missed you
in my life-
In my dreams-
Oh how I need to open my eyes; and see you there;
Yes; Oh yes I can touch you there
© Lisa Hilbers
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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is very beautiful,excellent work,take care
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|My gawd, Lisa, this is so well written that it seemed as though I was living each line and emotion. It quickened my breath and made me long for the touch of that one who has yet to return. Oh! but in my dreams when I drift deep into my soul, I can touch him there for his perfumed ink has left its tattoo upon my most private spaces. This poem grabs on and holds tight and the will to deny melts into the indigo-pink sunrise of hope. Fantastic writing, Lisa, you have knocked my socks off, yet again, with the skill and magic of your pen.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Exquisite writing Lisa, this one touched me deeply and personal, this is a keeper
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Beautiful work! We loved every word,
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Perfection within this write! Applause!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Exceptionally well written...love it!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lisa You wrote this from every fibre of your being.I agree with Jerry!Exceptional capture!...thanks for your birthday wishes, and the same back to you. Hope your birthday is all you want it to be and many more to come!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You leave me in hushed awe...beautiful, heartfelt, soaring passion! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Great pen Lisa. Enjoyed|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is one of the best poems of passion and love and all that goes with those two emotions that I believe I have ever read. It's naked starkness is what grabbed me immediately and then possessed me in an immovable stranglehold for the duration of my reading it. Absolutely first-rate, Lisa.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Very beautiful and sensual write. Is it me or is it warm in this room? (lol)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Just beautiful, Lisa; very nice! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D