Death: A Prayer
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, March 10, 2006
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Death, approach with care,
Give my mother a few more days
So she may say goodbye to her family.
Death, applaud your share,
But, hold your curtain from falling
Just a few more days.
Death, append your eyesight,
Grant my mother a few more days
So her family may say goodbye to her.
Death, appease your appetite,
But, hold back your hunger
Just a few more days…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/10/06
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|a moving plea that hopefully will be answered ...|
|Reviewed by Anne Williams
|i pray your words were heard. may your family be blessed with strength. ~a|
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|A moving tribute and prayer. All strength and peace to you.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Oh if it would be so. I wish you and yours strength, Erin. A prayer...Lin|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Blessings and thoughts to you my friend.
|Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Poetic and polemic to the last. My heart goes out to thee and thine.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This wasn't what I expected--it was much, much more. That's the way I'm feeling about my Daddy. Very, very well penned, poignant write; thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.