Death: A Prayer
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, March 10, 2006
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Death, approach with care,
Give my mother a few more days
So she may say goodbye to her family.
Death, applaud your share,
But, hold your curtain from falling
Just a few more days.
Death, append your eyesight,
Grant my mother a few more days
So her family may say goodbye to her.
Death, appease your appetite,
But, hold back your hunger
Just a few more days…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/10/06
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/12/2006 |
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| a moving plea that hopefully will be answered ... |
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| Reviewed by Anne Williams |
3/11/2006 |
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| i pray your words were heard. may your family be blessed with strength. ~a |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
3/10/2006 |
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| A moving tribute and prayer. All strength and peace to you. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/10/2006 |
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| Oh if it would be so. I wish you and yours strength, Erin. A prayer...Lin |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
3/10/2006 |
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Blessings and thoughts to you my friend.
Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Brian Pellerino |
3/10/2006 |
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EEKM,
Poetic and polemic to the last. My heart goes out to thee and thine.
Peace,
B |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/10/2006 |
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Erin,
This wasn't what I expected--it was much, much more. That's the way I'm feeling about my Daddy. Very, very well penned, poignant write; thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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