|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Beautiful! So's the blonde!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A beauty Susan!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|As gorgeous as the author! Every line is a feast for the passionate romantic. Beautifully written!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Beautifully passionate write and whoever is your kindred soul is sure a lucky man if the picture with the poem is you. Well done.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Absolutely lovely writing, Susan; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A lovingly compelling poem of love and passion, Susan. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Turns passionate enthusiasm on faster than a blink of an eye! Emotion-stimulating vibration, red excites, green tranquilizes to ease that burn! Nice write, Susan.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|"And when nights dreams are finished
When sun comes breaking through
My lips will still be famished
For a loving taste of you...." <----------------sublime opening!
And that ending,
"I lie in comfort, earth bound...
As thoughts of midnight fly
Then he'll return to ease that burn
Then kiss awake my eyes." <----------supreme tenderness!
An all around, satisfying write, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
It dozen't get any better than this
Exquisite lines, embroidered with love and affection