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Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Breaking the Monotony
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, March 10, 2006
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Winter white backdrop.
A bold splash of red breaks the
monotony of

uniformity:
diversion, Nature designed
to bring great pleasure.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Janet Bellinger	3/16/2006

Great haiku, Karla. I love the way you actually use red print. janet




Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher	3/11/2006

We have to agree, Fabulous! Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	3/11/2006

Fabulous haiku Karla!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	3/11/2006

i like this




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	3/11/2006

Fabulous haiku, Karla! love and peace, Carole




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	3/11/2006

Nothing monotonous about this post, Karla. Those lovely red cardinals often break the white scene just outside my winter window.




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	3/11/2006

Karla: Your poetry is beocming better and better everyday. Wonderful write! Good choice of picture! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	3/11/2006

Fantastic!




Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers	3/11/2006

Karla, I just love to sit in the Winter time and watch the cardinals color the scenery. It reminds me of a Christmas tree coming to life. Such vibrance they bring to an otherwise dull place. You do well with Ku, Karla. and I just love the photo! Lisa




Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)	3/10/2006

A master haiku you are. Great work




Reviewed by Felix Perry	3/10/2006

Wonderful match of words and image to create a pretty picture of natures best work. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	3/10/2006

How well you captured it Karla! I Love Cardinals!Beautiful work! eT




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	3/10/2006

Yes, nature can bring along all the right elements. Nicely done, Karla. Carmen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	3/10/2006

Karla~ Wonderful haiku, lovely imagery! BRAVA; very well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Suzie Palmer	3/10/2006

Dear Karla This is haiku is wonderful! Well done! Such a beautiful image to compliment a beautiful poem! Shine On! Love & friendship Suzie xox :-D




Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater	3/10/2006

Diversion lets us decode information from our environment of blacks and whites. This is a good lesson in the monotony of the same style of writing, Karla. We writers have to put some red in every now and again to keep our audience's attention! You did that just fine, here. Thanks for the splash of color! Sage




Reviewed by Peter Paton	3/10/2006

You break the convention of convention Karla And it is good to be always challenging the accepted status quo, that way we set new records and techniques ! I thought I could see two figures in the background Karla ! Love and Blessings Peter




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	3/10/2006

YES!!! Nature has a red pen at times...pink ink at times and bold strokes of azure blue. She's a polaroid...awonderful work of art. Great...I REALLY LOVE this! Susan

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