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Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Breaking the Monotony
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Friday, March 10, 2006
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Winter white backdrop.
A bold splash of red breaks the
monotony of

uniformity:
diversion, Nature designed
to bring great pleasure.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Janet Bellinger 3/16/2006
Great haiku, Karla. I love the way you actually use red print.

janet
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 3/11/2006
We have to agree, Fabulous!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/11/2006
Fabulous haiku Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/11/2006
i like this
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/11/2006
Fabulous haiku, Karla!
love and peace, Carole
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/11/2006
Nothing monotonous about this post, Karla. Those lovely red cardinals often break the white scene just outside my winter window.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/11/2006
Karla:

Your poetry is beocming better and better everyday. Wonderful write! Good choice of picture!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/11/2006
Fantastic!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/11/2006
Karla,
I just love to sit in the Winter time and watch the cardinals color the scenery. It reminds me of a Christmas tree coming to life. Such vibrance they bring to an otherwise dull place.
You do well with Ku, Karla. and I just love the photo!

Lisa
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 3/10/2006
A master haiku you are. Great work
Reviewed by Felix Perry 3/10/2006
Wonderful match of words and image to create a pretty picture of natures best work.

Felix
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/10/2006
How well you captured it Karla! I Love Cardinals!Beautiful work!

eT
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 3/10/2006
Yes, nature can bring along all the right elements. Nicely done, Karla.

Carmen
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/10/2006
Karla~

Wonderful haiku, lovely imagery! BRAVA; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 3/10/2006
Dear Karla
This is haiku is wonderful! Well done! Such a beautiful image to compliment a beautiful poem! Shine On!
Love & friendship Suzie xox :-D
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 3/10/2006
Diversion lets us decode information from our environment of blacks and whites. This is a good lesson in the monotony of the same style of writing, Karla. We writers have to put some red in every now and again to keep our audience's attention! You did that just fine, here. Thanks for the splash of color!

Sage
Reviewed by Peter Paton 3/10/2006
You break the convention of convention Karla
And it is good to be always challenging the accepted status quo, that way we set new records and techniques !
I thought I could see two figures in the background Karla !
Love and Blessings
Peter
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 3/10/2006
YES!!!
Nature has a red pen at times...pink ink at times and bold strokes of azure blue. She's a polaroid...awonderful work of art.

Great...I REALLY LOVE this!
Susan
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