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Children's Fantasy in the tradition of Aesop's Fables where mythical creatures take on human characteristics and the story illustrates a moral lesson. Ages 8-10..  
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by Peter Paton
Sunday, March 12, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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" Thought I would try a Cinquain...a five line stanza.....inspired by Susan Singleton's " Pansy "...I am getting adventurous....lols



I care not what the World may say

I need your love in so many different ways

for I can't live without you a single day

my heart is bursting within me with delight

for you are the radiant star of my life


Copyright by Peter Paton 2006

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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
A very creative and good sense of adventure!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
An expressive passion contained within five lines. Peter, you've found your own FREE mind and heart!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
The title would suggest a solitary person, yet I suspect there are two at play here.

Reviewed by Sherry Heim
Beautiful, Peter! Wonderful format, it truly makes a strong statement.
Take care,
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
wonderful verses to charm...
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
This is really lovey
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Your poetry ripens like aged wine. You keep getting better. I look for your poetry and he progress daily. Keep surprising me Peter. You shine my friend.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Beautiful Peter!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
wonderful sentiment applied to this genre ...
Reviewed by George Carroll
Haven't tried this format and I'm sure that there are many others I haven't done also but you have done a fine job on this one and your bride will be happy to see it and give you a big reward.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Very beautifully said,Peter! Your talent is such that you can tackle anything and do it flawlessly!

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Venture on! Lovely Cinquain, Peter. She will surely delight in this...Lin
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Such a beautiful profession of your love. A better gift cannot be given than that which flows from the heart.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Yes! This is absolutely beautiful, Peter. And once again I must say that the woman in your life is so very blessed to have your love!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Adventure suits your adventurous, poetic, romantic, soul, Peter.

Write On!
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
Perfect love poem to the lady in your life. You write so many different forms and they are all wonderful.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Adventure is good, Peter, and so are the results of it. This is a lovely poem. Love the picture, as well.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Sound and looks good to me, Peter, and if written with someone in mind as it is most likely, it is a gem.
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