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by Peter Paton

Sunday, March 12, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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" Thought I would try a Cinquain...a five line stanza.....inspired by Susan Singleton's " Pansy "...I am getting adventurous....lols



I care not what the World may say

I need your love in so many different ways

for I can't live without you a single day

my heart is bursting within me with delight

for you are the radiant star of my life


Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 3/13/2006
A very creative and good sense of adventure!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 3/12/2006
An expressive passion contained within five lines. Peter, you've found your own FREE mind and heart!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 3/12/2006
The title would suggest a solitary person, yet I suspect there are two at play here.

Reviewed by Sherry Heim 3/12/2006
Beautiful, Peter! Wonderful format, it truly makes a strong statement.
Take care,
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) 3/12/2006
wonderful verses to charm...
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 3/12/2006
This is really lovey
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 3/12/2006
Your poetry ripens like aged wine. You keep getting better. I look for your poetry and he progress daily. Keep surprising me Peter. You shine my friend.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/12/2006
Beautiful Peter!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 3/12/2006
wonderful sentiment applied to this genre ...
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/12/2006
Haven't tried this format and I'm sure that there are many others I haven't done also but you have done a fine job on this one and your bride will be happy to see it and give you a big reward.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/12/2006
Very beautifully said,Peter! Your talent is such that you can tackle anything and do it flawlessly!

Reviewed by L. Figgins 3/12/2006
Venture on! Lovely Cinquain, Peter. She will surely delight in this...Lin
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 3/12/2006
Such a beautiful profession of your love. A better gift cannot be given than that which flows from the heart.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 3/12/2006
Yes! This is absolutely beautiful, Peter. And once again I must say that the woman in your life is so very blessed to have your love!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/12/2006
Adventure suits your adventurous, poetic, romantic, soul, Peter.

Write On!
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger 3/12/2006
Perfect love poem to the lady in your life. You write so many different forms and they are all wonderful.

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 3/12/2006
Adventure is good, Peter, and so are the results of it. This is a lovely poem. Love the picture, as well.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/12/2006
Sound and looks good to me, Peter, and if written with someone in mind as it is most likely, it is a gem.

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