|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|That's life--in a nutshell.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Stunning work, deeply thought provoking and well penned; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Splendid write Susan!!
|Reviewed by . ignis
|Words saturated with emotion that the reflect the complexity of our souls and life. We stand inside a maze without directions or maps and only intuition to guide us. It never betrays us, we merely misinterpret at times. But beside giving way for disease and discomfort, time also heals in order to allow us to resume our path through the maze. Mavigating on shimmers of the Light that we in time learn to distinguish from ignis fatii.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Beautiful work, Susan "Putting all my anger and inner light aside
Preferring Hell's Chariot as a simpler way to ride
Down to despair and darkness... to a hole of nothingness
Down much deeper to the pitch to find the me in us"
That was fantastic
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Splendid work Susan! Each line is powerful and invites awareness!
The kind of write that can change lives.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|When we were young, we looked through a darkened glass, now that we have grown up, and are mature adults, we see with the inner eye of experience and intuition, as it is...reality, whether good or bad, like someone said in the Den last night, we have choices in life, now we can make informed choices borne on that inner guile and wisdom, to effect the necessary and vital changes we must programme into our lives, if we seek to attain all our dreams and desires.
Your poetry continues to shine and sparkle my friend !
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very graphic images that scare and then offer hope as the phrases like Hell's Chariots change to ones of fertile birth and flying. You really outdid yourself with this one.