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|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|Sure, it was great until we got to this point:
What are you doing in my house?
Don't you know they make traps for the mouse?
I saw Uncle David kill one of you -
merciless, unmerciful, not giving too.
Yeah it was warm before you were found out.
Now I'll be rude so you'll know to move out.
Run for your life little spying non-friend,
or you'll be the slaughtered lamb for sure
in the end.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, very well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|If we but repent of our sins He'll be their to welcome all of us. Great inspirational poem on the Sabbath Day of the Lord.|