Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Fire Sky (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

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Haiku Chain (5/7/5): Fire Sky
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, March 13, 2006
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the sky, on fire
as the sun sets slowly
in the West - vivid

hues of orange and
red and purple tinge the clouds
brilliant against a

backdrop of azure
clarity after last night's
sudden thunderstorms -

a breath of fresh air;
needed break from bad weather
for the Southern Plains.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Mr. Ed	3/14/2006

A marvelous picture - a marvelous Haiku Chain, Karla.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	3/14/2006

Excellent!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	3/14/2006

Karla: This is well-described. Well-done! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Felix Perry	3/14/2006

You are certainly liveing up to your new title and this poem as in a series of weather related issues is no exception, good technique and word paintings. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	3/13/2006

Exquisite haiku Karla! word paintings at their finest! eT




Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater	3/13/2006

Your words in this contemporary word painting are synonymous with having your sights on the sky barrel, taking aim on the colors that throb with life, Karla. Sage




Reviewed by Carole Mathys	3/13/2006

Your visual words enhance the beauty of the picture Karla...beautiful love and peace, Carole




Reviewed by jude forese	3/13/2006

you have a genuine ability to capture nature's ambiance and magnificence ...




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	3/13/2006

Predicted for thunderboomers here, but Rufuz has me to curl up against, and I love a good storm...ed




Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher	3/13/2006

A powerful and wonderful picture and write! Love, Birgit and Roger




Reviewed by totally anonymous	3/13/2006

a beautiful tribute to nature with an awe inspiring image




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	3/13/2006

I saw where Texas was burning up...wildfire really does make for beautiful sunrises and sunsets though. Colorful images paint your verses, Karla. Nice job!! Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	3/13/2006

You've painted the picture, alright! Carmen :-)




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	3/13/2006

nicely done




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	3/13/2006

Karla~ Beautiful picture to accompany a most satisfying, calming piece after last night's storms. Tonight's sunset inspired this, didn't it? If so, you did it proud! :) BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	3/13/2006

Beautiful colors of a southwestern sunset. The colors are poignant words for your lines of pure beauty Karla. I'm impressed. Susan




Reviewed by Peter Paton	3/13/2006

Absolutely breathtaking kus, done in your own inimitable style Karla You have become a master of these haikus...:) Stunning picture accompanying the pens Watch out for those vicious twisters in the Mid West ! Peter

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