by Trish MacQueen - The Trickster
Monday, March 13, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Hey all...hope everyone is doing well. I am fine and working my way back into the mainstream. Keep writing and smilling. Hugs, Trish
Sweet words whispered gently in open ears,
Quiet soft words spoken aloud without fears,
A gentle smile placed lovingly on warm lips,
While soothing fingers tingle across my hips.
Sweet words quoting poetic music in sound,
As loose clothing falls quickly to the ground,
And awkwardness vanishes beyond today,
While glistening sunshine shimmers away.
Sweet words pushing back all past mistakes,
While effortlessly banishing all those fakes,
And causing truth to filter in along the way,
Enriched with passion, on this special day.
Sweet words, time to stand alone and strong,
As cradling arms show me, where I belong,
And bitter tears fall, releasing hurt and pain,
While I enjoy the sweet words that remain.
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|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Trish, how deeply this touches my heart, I hope things go well for you. I have missed your poetry so much,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|after reading this poem there's no need for me to pursue my sweet fix today ... hope all is well ...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Miss you. Good to see you writing again.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I hope and pray you will be surrounded by sweet words and sweet acts.That you will be strengthened for whatever you will face in the months to come. You are a fighter and didn't get to where you are witout fortitude and I know you will find whatever it takes to go on! May you be blessed with all that you need!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|You will always be a lady of class and this show in how you handle life changes :-)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|You are ever in my thoughts and prayers, dear heart! Wonderful write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You are in my prayers Sis!!
Keep the faith...YOU ARE NOT ALONE!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
weet words never fails to make us strong. I hope you are strong for this period of your life.
((((( Love and Hugs )))))
Sandie May Angel
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|Strength to you, my friend!|