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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tuesday, March 21, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I am okay; this just came so strongly to me. And so, I write.

Where were you when day and night changed hands
and love was replaced by hate?
Where were you when war became the norm
and the small became the great?
Where were you when the storm raged on
and poetry bored to death?
Where were you when the crying began
and life meant having no breath? ...

Where were you when sun and moon blinked out
and my colored world went grey?
Where were you when I needed you most
and why have you gone away?

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by jude forese 3/22/2006
i empathize with this query ... i guess when it comes down to it we can only rely on oursleves ...
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/22/2006
These are the hard ones to find answers for Karla, but your splendid poem makes them easier to ask....
love and peace, Carole
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 3/21/2006
Questions we have to ask, Karla. We all have some of the same questions. Sometimes we need just quiet our minds and the answers to these questions come to us, in the same way like it just come to you to write this. We have to see with the mind's eye and meditate the outcome. You will get the answers to your questions, but not in the traditional way. That's too easy. They will come to you one day and the Spirit will have spoken.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/21/2006

Excellent write; good questions you raise! BRAVA; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/21/2006
Superb poem Karla! your versatility shows in
writes like this, you have great depth!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/21/2006
And I pray you keep writing, and excellent piece, and good questions. May you keep being inspired to write such profound pieces
God Bless
Reviewed by totally anonymous 3/21/2006
first of all loved the image. The write was exceptionally well done
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 3/21/2006
This is excellent, just came to you? Wow!
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/21/2006
This is when the Spirit is holding us, but being human we don't notice.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/21/2006
Alot of question I could ask myself Sis!!

Write right on sis!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/21/2006
Whether they are gone, or wherher they are fantasy, means little in the long run. If they are gone, leving you without solace, then you are better off without 'em. If they are merely figments, well, that is a horse of a different color. Sometimes we need to conjure up these "figments" for our own personal reasons. Loved the poem and just didn't know when to stop commenting. Okay. I've stopped.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 3/21/2006
Sometimes people get weighed down with personal responsibilities and obligations, Karla..
They'll be back when the going is good !
Great picture again Stormspinner !

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