Mama It's Me (Sensitive Subject, Graphic Picture)
by Michelle R Kidwell Power In The Pen
Tuesday, March 21, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Mama it's me
the baby whose live
the doctor took
because you believed it was okay.
Mama I forgive you
but don't believe them
When they tell you it didn't hurt me
Because I felt the pain
As they stripped life away from me
and threw me away
made you believe
I was no better than trash.
Mamma it's been awhile now
and I am in Heaven with Jesus
but I wonder why you let them murder me.
Copyright Michelle R Kidwell
March.21.06
4:18 P.M PST
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| Reviewed by Sarah Tagert |
3/22/2006 |
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| very moving write |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/21/2006 |
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Graphic and chilling but true. from the "Dumpster babies" to the clinical office of an abortionist it is just plain old WRONG!!!
Sav A Life means just this. There are options to support love and to get the word out to those who are ignorant or just disrespectful of life...well, it's important.
This has gripped my night and I applaud your boldness to speak. Tune us all in. We deserve this and it educates in a graphic sense but this is exactly what happens.
It is a shame.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau |
3/21/2006 |
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i wonder what would happen if roe v. wade were overturned, and abortion became illegal; would prolifers run out and start adopting crack addicted/hiv infected/handicapped babies, or will the state be overrun with millions of kids in the fostercare/adoptive sytem, with no hope or prospect of finding a family, forcing me to pay for them through my taxes? i'm not prolife or prochoice; as a male, i don't have the right to make any sort of judgement. abortion is a women's issue; not the church, not the state, not anyone else's but the woman faced with the decision to have or not have a baby. as a side, i find it funny that the ones who protest abortion the most visibly (usually white christian males) also support the death penalty, and the war in iraq. just some thoughts i wanted to share.
with respect, alex |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/21/2006 |
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Michelle,
Heartbreaking question from the one who did not have a voice to speak in his or her defense. Powerfully, emotively penned--thank you for letting the unborn's words shout from your talented pen.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/21/2006 |
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Abortion is an aberration in the eyes of the Lord, Michelle
Keep trumpeting the rights of the unborn child, and get the horrible
Roe v Wade decision overturned in the Supreme Court, by the Grace of God !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/21/2006 |
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Michelle,
Heartbreakingly raw write; abortion is murder in the worst sense! Keep on speaking for those who have no voice, eventually, someone will listen (hopefully)! God bless you, Michelle!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears < |
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