|Reviewed by Augustine Sam
|Profound ... sated with hidden meaning.
So profound ... that in the lonesome void, as 'her' reflection just bounced back, the delicate beauty of the verse turned its beam on 'her' not-so-concealed emotion.
Lovely. Compelling. Skilfully crafted.
|Reviewed by David Young
|I liked this especially:
A lively patina of emotions
squirmed across her thoughts
like static electricity
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Breathtaking is the word!! Actually, I can't think of a
superlative that is strong enough. You show instead of tell, and
that is far harder than it looks. L o v e i t. 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Breath taking write!|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Psychologically dramatic, spiritually mesmerizing, and artistically flawless. A great read on every level.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent imagery and metaphor ...|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Storms intrique me. The more intense they are, the better I like it. Well..to a point anyway.
There's just something about the wind and rain, the lightning flashes and rolls of thunder that wake something deep within me.
You've taken words and stirred that very feeling, which not easily done.
A grand photo you've painted here in words.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A storm can often stir the soul, Carole. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly powerful piece, Carole - felt like I was there, also watching that dark stormy night.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful wite, Carole; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|Carole, your imagery is totaly stunningin your lines. You are a true poet inspiration muse..Thanks..!!!!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
A StormSpinner's kind of write--my ultimate compliment, wish I'd written it! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Beautiful written it creates strong emotions.
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Outstanding piece Carole!!
Thanks for sharing!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|E T and Jerry's comments I agree with whole heartedly. Wonderfully spun tale.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is scary stuff. You and Karla were both thinking storms in the nigh today. Lonely, actually more than scary is this beautifully told tale of desperation.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a fantastic conveying of emotions analgous to the storm!
The interaction is eloquently played! A gem of a poem, Carole!