Come To Me...In The Morning
by Susan K. de Vegter
Thursday, March 23, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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"Why not seize the pleasure at once? How often is happiness destroyed by preparation, foolish preparation!"
Come to me in the morning, waken me with passion,
Flirt within my freckled flesh then give my energy action
Brush away my golden bangs and kiss the forehead fair
Daub each lid with moistened lips and squeeze each goose bump there
Unfold all my limber parts and settle on my chest
Run your tongue upon my cheek, my chin, my neck and breast
Lie upon my wakened form and swell within my morning
Bleach the walls with whispered moans then listen for love calling
Place your head within my heart and feel the beat that's there
Heave into my speechless moans take each breathe from here
Love me loud enough for worlds beyond what normal gives
To stop their spin and recognize the woven love that lives.
Penned by, Susan K. de Vegter
© copyright, 2006 (all rights reserved)
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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Very erotically yours. See you in the morning?
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sensuous and passionate; most enthralling, Susan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very - very nice Susan!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|utterly sensuous softly erotic, beautifully passionate
you poured this one out like honey!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is such a truly majestic work of erotic purity expressing the love of two people I have come across. The recipiant of this poems affection is a lucky person.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|This is the fluid result, the quintessence of this line! A dripping metaphor! Surely it came to you Susan ... it's the title!
"Bleach the walls with whispered moans then listen for love calling"
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Question: why can't I be awakened like this in the morning? I'm jealous!!!!!! Beautifully passionate, slowly building to a delightful climax. Very well penned!! Again: I'm jealous! :) (Good on you!!!!)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful write, Susan; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Very passionate and romantic sentiments that stir the senses, and captivate the heart
The way true love should really be...:)
With a superb, symbolic picture
You are the Queen of Romance, Susan !