No longer in the dark, bringing it to
You come out of your medieval
your sexual tendencies hang in
you swoop erratically at
to entice me into sucking your
Using your salival
you keep me flowing
Diving through a
your carnal desires cut
like shards of
Impaling your piercing
the bedsheets crease and
We give into our
surreal animation, the third
bringing it to
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties
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|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|TRILOGY: OUT OF THE MEDIEVAL CLOSET is a totally stunning multi-media creation. While your work may unabashedly celebrate same-sex love, it also, for this reader/viewer, generates cascades of transcendent beauty and sexual heat appealing to virtually any erotic sensibility. From a powerful and treasured foundation of sacred flesh and sacred blood, your art spirals and blossoms into the essence of classic forms, themes, imagery, and passion. Brilliant stuff indeed.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|luv the mystery & magic to your erotic poems, Sage ,,,|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|This is stupendously erotic tapestry of enchanting imagery woven with a special magic. Outstanding Sage.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Sucking kisses. Driving through panes. Just a couple of erotic visuals you have managed to imprint upon my lustful Id. Also, I am not one who likes photos accompanying poetry, but how can I not enjoy gazing at the sweet treats you have given us.|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|"the bedsheets crease and
retreat." S e x s a t i o n a l !! I second everything the others have said. Pantin' too hard to add more:). ~~ Really, this is
awesome. Shine on!! 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|...back into the cold shower I go again...at least with your writes I get shower often, that will make Rufuz and the neighborhood happy...Ed|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Mesmerizing, Sage; and the visuals most effectively complement the verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Miss Sage...you have a way with words and the sauvy to animate them with visuals to stamp the verse into immortality. In more simple terms your poetry is erotic, passionate and fluid.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Sensational erotica in your own inimitable style, Sister Sage...
Nobody does it better than you
Almost makes you wish you were a woman...lols
|Reviewed by totally anonymous
|A very passionate write. Gorgeous images|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Fantastic write, awesome pictures; very satisfying erotica at its best! BRAVA, Sage!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I often wonder where you get these images from! Fantastic write.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Exquiste pics only underline each beautiful, passionate line, which builds to a totally satisfying climax. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.