Fairy Tale Fallacies One
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sunday, March 26, 2006
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There are no knights in shining armor, no
Ice castles for princesses blind, are no
Footprints of devils in snow, trod upon,
Nowhere to go, I know, there is no snow.
I live a life of life renewed, I know
What to do in startled experience,
Yet, I wonder if I do, know what to do,
I mean. I wonder Grimm, and wander cold…
There is no price to shining armor, no
Advice that shatters druthers, there are no
Footprints on the moon as blind as mine. So,
I guess this is a new experiment
Of Life. I cannot fail to repute souls’
Tales of evisceration. I’m no one.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/26/06
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|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|A write that will make you stop and wonder...excellently done,
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|you are someone and you don't have to point to footprints to prove it, Erin. this is something that has taken me many long years to come to a peace about. walk on, Dawn|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thought provoking excellence; heartbreaking, in a way...reading these lines left me sad. Hope you're okay--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|living each moment as if it were new. seing the world through innocent eyes, and yet being immersed in its, its unblinkered actuality. the last lines hit me hardest, as you went from within to without, reflecting the effect of such perceptions upon others.|