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All Winds Combined by Susan K. de Vegter Monday, March 27, 2006 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan People fall deep before God finds them. This is an older poem.

It would take more than all winds combined... Tornadoes, hurricanes...all with a fierce whine... Still nothing could dry the tears hung out. For sadness engulfed inside, I shout! Why are you gone? Why not take me? Now I'm alone embraced in a sea... Of sadness, despair...pity this fool Terrified of being...just being...a tool Of lonliness now, no smiles to turn The corners up or a kiss to burn A tatoo of hope inside of these walls Empty this gloom...hollow these halls As shadows of fog...broken with grays No light to shine...gone are the days For hope that has flown with wings in a sling For ghosts are alone, love's kiss...a sting It bites to the bone .. This pain never pales It soars with the moans ... In whispers ...it sails Future a question Nothing to greet Lonely souls sigh... Hearts miss a beat Chins dripping salt... Liquids in pounds Crying and streaming to pool on the ground For now you have vanished and I am alone Flown with the wind...hearts turned to stone Tears of hot moisture, burning the flesh No tokens of love...left here to mesh. Some recall of happiness...Jesus this pain Marrying my tears...in torrents, it rains Waiting for Grace...praying I cry Redeem all my tears and help them to dry. � 2006 by Susan K. de Vegter �

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull	4/2/2006

The very soul of anguish. Ron




Reviewed by L. Figgins	3/27/2006

In facing our shadow and feeling it to the core, we ARE brought to God and ourselves. Oh you know I love this write, Susan!! Lin




Reviewed by Felix Perry	3/27/2006

Intense write with so much emotion in it that it screams from the page to be read and acknowledged. I hope this is old and the pain has subsided for you to liveable levels. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	3/27/2006

Susan this shows the torment of being without Creator's grace and the difference when we have it. You have such a powerful pen it is especially splendid when you write like this, to enlighten others! Thank you for sharing! Eileen




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	3/27/2006

Powerful poem, Susan; extremely well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(




Reviewed by Peter Paton	3/27/2006

You can feel the deep pain and torment in this agaonizing pen.. Reads like an Old Testament lamentation, with a plea to God for Deliverance.. Gripping poem Susan ! Peter




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	3/27/2006

A wail in the misery of fallen love. Been that. Done that. Yes, you are so right, it seems we must wallow in our own horrible despair before we can see that Shining Light among all the muck. Good.




Reviewed by George Carroll	3/27/2006

Oh death where is thy sting, but in my heart you did bring.




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	3/27/2006

Susan, Excellence, once again--we cry for relief and wonder when it will come; I felt this one deep in my soul. Thank you-- (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.




Reviewed by Kenny Moon	3/27/2006

powerful plea for union with the Higher Power, the spirit trapped in a dismal world. You rise above, susan.... :-))