|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The very soul of anguish.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|In facing our shadow and feeling it to the core, we ARE brought to God and ourselves. Oh you know I love this write, Susan!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Intense write with so much emotion in it that it screams from the page to be read and acknowledged. I hope this is old and the pain has subsided for you to liveable levels.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Susan this shows the torment of being without Creator's grace and the difference when we have it. You have such a powerful pen it is especially splendid when you write like this, to enlighten others!
Thank you for sharing!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful poem, Susan; extremely well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|You can feel the deep pain and torment in this agaonizing pen..
Reads like an Old Testament lamentation, with a plea to God for Deliverance..
Gripping poem Susan !
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|A wail in the misery of fallen love. Been that. Done that. Yes, you are so right, it seems we must wallow in our own horrible despair before we can see that Shining Light among all the muck. Good.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Oh death where is thy sting, but in my heart you did bring.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Excellence, once again--we cry for relief and wonder when it will come; I felt this one deep in my soul. Thank you--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Ken Becula
|powerful plea for union with the Higher Power, the spirit trapped in a dismal world. You rise above, susan.... :-))|