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~ View from the Top ~



A heavy haze is rolling in

settling over the mountains

draping them in a cloak of gray

hiding the sun

that earlier warmed

the rolling green hills

This is a place where nature plays

a perfect spot to stop and rest

as beauty around you spills

  Peace and tranquility

surround  you  as you pause

among the hills

Serenity seems to seep from nature

like a warm cape

that caresses your soul

Your peaceful interlude is interrupted

the storm is moving toward you

as dark rain filled clouds

billow and roll closer

swallowing up the landscape



Carole Mathys


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Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

An outstanding composition in contents and art. "View from the Top" shows how poetic grand glows.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
You create the desired ambiance most effectively in your verses, Carole. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by jude forese
i luv the feel and imagery to this poem ... lovely view indeed ...
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
A perfect capture of that moment in nature when there is the impact and then the transition... the comfort around the shoulders that makes you feel warmly at one with the world - and then the slight detachment and the "push" to move on and move away. A beautiful pastoral work, Carole, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Love the imagery...lovely writee Carole!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Well, you had ME along for the ride at the top of the universe! Dark thoughts alongside the peaceful valley scenerio.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Beautifully imaged and written; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Superb imagery in this beautiful write; great stuff! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Captivating capture of the moment Carole. Sparkling imagery!
I could feel the change as the storm moved in...Great poem!

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