by Denise Edwards
Wednesday, April 05, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Just my thoughts on paper
Time, it reveals all
in Time, one can see
how life begins and ends
how it starts and stops
Time, it begins at the bottom
and rises to the top
all in all, its Time
we need to share it
take care of it
and always be aware of it
Time, how fast it goes, without warning
how long it lasts, til our morning
is up, and our evening has arrived
dusk has crept in slowly,
nudging us forth
while we plead for yet aother while
to see yet another day
but Time, it shakes its head,
no! I will not wait!
come ye all, clean your slate!
Time, waste it with regret
cherish it's integrity
honor its longevity
But do give it, it's due
Time, it waits for no one
not me, not he, nor you!
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|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Good old "time", something some precious, that is often wasted.
Nice write, best wishes.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
I foumd timeless time
A facinating piece to read
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Certainly gives me pause to stop and think, Denise, and you spend your time well to dwell and meditate on such things! Thank you for sharing this and I love the lines: Time, waste it with regret / cherish it's integrity / honor its longevity / But do give it, it's due ... Much wisdom here. Bless you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This was truly an amazing piece. Thank you Denise!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I enjoyed reading Timeless Time, Denise.|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
|These thoughts on paper, born of the heart, formed by the mind, nurtured by the spirit, are a blessing to all of us.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Time and Tide wait for no man or woman...lols
Great write on the remorseless passage of time , Denise !
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|So true Denise. Time waits for no one.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Ah, how true... so aptly put. It's so good to read you again, my friend.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You are right, Denise; time in this dimension needs attention. However, we never die so let's not get too down about the fact that we are very slow learners. Love this write of yours. Love and peace to you with thanks,
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|DEEP AND INVIGORATING ..........M|
|Reviewed by Tyrone Banks
|So true...no one is promised tomorrow.|