|Reviewed by June Thompson
|I'm totally with Steven Lance on this one!!!
|Reviewed by Meredith Dixon
|Yes, Felix, very bittersweet but glad you wrote this!!! Love from Meredith|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|This is a very great piece of poetry!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Very good...it does 'thrust'|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Aha!! You had me going there... oooo, yes, the thrill of the illicit... but, as you perhaps subtley suggest, in the mind is where it all starts... and is it AS bad if it also stops there??? Hmmmm.... doubtless a hot potato and I am, of course, playin devil's advocate here... not that he needs one... we seem to do a pretty good job on our own, one way or another! Mindboggling write, Pops... honest, though. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|wow Felix..........very good!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Bittersweet thoughts Felix!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|Ouch! Sounds like a sad story. Nicely done, Felix.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like the flow and direction of this poem ... well done, Felix ...|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|love this crisp write!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|This is great, Felix. The 2- & 3-syllable lines create a great
flow and a lot of snap. Following up with four-syllable words
that are different in tone and feel from what goes before
is inspired, in my opinion. Mad, sad, and slightly funny, like
a relationship -- most any relationship, but where it comes
to romance, h-e-l-p. Thanks for posting this gem. <3 Pea <3
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Delicious and daring poetry my dear man.
I like this part of your creativity.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Much to read in succinct, thought provoking verse. A poem with a profound lesson. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.