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Sijo: The Flip Side
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Friday, April 07, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The air is a stagnant entity, pressing down like a blanket.
Lungs spasm like a bellows, trying to draw a deep breath.
Humidity chokes mankind, encourages green, growing things.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 4/9/2006
Excellent done! Hope your head feels a little better!
Love, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/7/2006
Well done Karla.
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 4/7/2006
Excellent, Karla!! You've got it!!

Peace. Joyce
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/7/2006
I hate humidity, which is why I chose California over Florida to retire to. My heart goes out to you if you still have that migraine, and humidity too! Great Sijo!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 4/7/2006
Excellent, though I do not look forward to high humidity...ed
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 4/7/2006
Oh how this makes me recall how it was when I lived in a humid place, Karla. Hard to breathe, impossible to cool down and a certain kind of lazy feeling that strangles the desire to enjoy the beauty that the humidity itself paints upon the earth. Beautiful poetry.
Take care,
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 4/7/2006
Lime green shades are everywhere here in the south. Pinks and pale yellows, lavendars and purples, pinks, fuschia and red...all a rainbow. After a rain there is a keener glow. Isn't nature an amazing artist.
Love and peace,
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 4/7/2006
Superb piece of work are excellent at these writes.

Hugs, Trish
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 4/7/2006

You are becoming quite the Masterful poetess! BRAVA on yet another stunning write! And that picture: GLORIOUS!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Peter Paton 4/7/2006
Wow...another stunning and sensational sijo, that describes a hot and humid day in good ole Texas perfectly...
Watch out for those devilish twisters, they are supposed to be on their way back to the South and West !
I adore that picture...:)
Love and Blessings

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