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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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Sijo: The Flip Side
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, April 07, 2006
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The air is a stagnant entity, pressing down like a blanket.
Lungs spasm like a bellows, trying to draw a deep breath.
Humidity chokes mankind, encourages green, growing things.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 



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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Excellent done! Hope your head feels a little better!
Love, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Well done Karla.
Felix
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Excellent, Karla!! You've got it!!

Peace. Joyce
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I hate humidity, which is why I chose California over Florida to retire to. My heart goes out to you if you still have that migraine, and humidity too! Great Sijo!

Love
Eileen
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Excellent, though I do not look forward to high humidity...ed
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
Oh how this makes me recall how it was when I lived in a humid place, Karla. Hard to breathe, impossible to cool down and a certain kind of lazy feeling that strangles the desire to enjoy the beauty that the humidity itself paints upon the earth. Beautiful poetry.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Lime green shades are everywhere here in the south. Pinks and pale yellows, lavendars and purples, pinks, fuschia and red...all a rainbow. After a rain there is a keener glow. Isn't nature an amazing artist.
Love and peace,
Susan
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Superb piece of work Karla...you are excellent at these writes.

Hugs, Trish
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Karla,

You are becoming quite the Masterful poetess! BRAVA on yet another stunning write! And that picture: GLORIOUS!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Karla
Wow...another stunning and sensational sijo, that describes a hot and humid day in good ole Texas perfectly...
Watch out for those devilish twisters, they are supposed to be on their way back to the South and West !
I adore that picture...:)
Love and Blessings
Peter
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