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Sijo: The Flip Side
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, April 07, 2006
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The air is a stagnant entity, pressing down like a blanket.
Lungs spasm like a bellows, trying to draw a deep breath.
Humidity chokes mankind, encourages green, growing things.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher	4/9/2006

Excellent done! Hope your head feels a little better! Love, Birgit and Roger




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/7/2006

Well done Karla. Felix




Reviewed by Joyce Hale	4/7/2006

Excellent, Karla!! You've got it!! Peace. Joyce




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/7/2006

I hate humidity, which is why I chose California over Florida to retire to. My heart goes out to you if you still have that migraine, and humidity too! Great Sijo! Love Eileen




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	4/7/2006

Excellent, though I do not look forward to high humidity...ed




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	4/7/2006

Oh how this makes me recall how it was when I lived in a humid place, Karla. Hard to breathe, impossible to cool down and a certain kind of lazy feeling that strangles the desire to enjoy the beauty that the humidity itself paints upon the earth. Beautiful poetry. Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	4/7/2006

Lime green shades are everywhere here in the south. Pinks and pale yellows, lavendars and purples, pinks, fuschia and red...all a rainbow. After a rain there is a keener glow. Isn't nature an amazing artist. Love and peace, Susan




Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster	4/7/2006

Superb piece of work Karla...you are excellent at these writes. Hugs, Trish




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	4/7/2006

Karla, You are becoming quite the Masterful poetess! BRAVA on yet another stunning write! And that picture: GLORIOUS! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Peter Paton	4/7/2006

Karla Wow...another stunning and sensational sijo, that describes a hot and humid day in good ole Texas perfectly... Watch out for those devilish twisters, they are supposed to be on their way back to the South and West ! I adore that picture...:) Love and Blessings Peter