|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Ah, you learned that trick too eh? Ideas are precious so it pays to get a poem and a story out of the same pack of seed.
I enjoyed this Sage and it left me wanting to know more of what happened to these star - crossed lovers.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the descriptions you have used in this one as you bring the characters to life.|
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|I love the scenes set up in these poems, and especially enjoy the music put with them.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|intriguing and spirited write ... great visuals ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You just keep writing these scens Sage, and we enjoy the drama!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A conglomeration of the Wild West and The Little House on the Prairie in this pioneering pen...
Your literary skills come to the fore again, in this fast moving and decriptive narrative
Rock on sister..
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Come out tonight...come out tonight to dance by the light of the moon. Life is just as it has been for centuries. We've just be into "labeling" for the last few centuries and, even then...I'm not sure Lesbianism was the rule.
I like the way you animate a poem...make it real so it moves.
Great work Sage.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh Sage, this was just delightful! I loved this so very much, excellent!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Excellent portrayal and atmosphere in your descriptive write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent poetry, dear Sage; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|What a wonderful scene you paint Sage, this reads just like a movie only the movie is never as good as the book...such stunning imagery can only come from a very talented pen.
|Reviewed by totally anonymous
|wow excellent visuals. Now i have to go read the story|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I am swept away in the atmosphere created by your poetic tale, Sage. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,