Meditation, (or my guru can out meditate your guru)
by Ed Matlack
Friday, April 07, 2006
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Sorry I deleted the wrong poem, and there were a few or so reviews, sorry to those that spared their time, I got a buzz and tried to do some deletions, oops...wrong move, LOL! |
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Selfless,
Selflessness,
Shelf life,
Lack of same…
Seeing within,
No sight,
Sightless,
Seeing what is…
Being a dog,
Loyalty,
No lack thereof,
Life just is…
Relax,
Breathe,
Smell the roses,
Sniff the manure,
All a part of life,
Play jacks…
© ed ~ 4/7/06
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
4/9/2006 |
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Really like this,
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/8/2006 |
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I know I commented before zenster, but I'll say hi anyway;-)Hi Rufuz;-)
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
4/8/2006 |
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Knock Knock... who's there?
Ahem... er, is Eddie home? You've been branching out, I see. This is really cool, you... the brevity of the lines, the "ladder" effect with the words, even the spacing. IT's open, free AND free-spirited.
I'd say you're doing some great explorations inside your bean. This is (I repeat myself) very cool, Mr. M. katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/8/2006 |
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| You are a lucky man, my friend - my dogs have also taught me many things - including sniffing those roses, and sometimes, even sniffing that manure - horse is the best! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/8/2006 |
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This is excellent, Ed. A bit of a different avenue for you, but well written and well received.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/8/2006 |
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Different!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Alexandre Arnau |
4/7/2006 |
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excellent excellent piece, ed. reminded me of tanka poetry, which i love. not your usual stuff, not that i don't enjoy those, too.
the things we could learn from our dogs.... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/7/2006 |
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| Interesting choice of title.....and the symbol with my active imagination became two guru's in a physical fight. One obviously got really hurt! Interesting thoughts. |
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