by Trish MacQueen - The Trickster
Saturday, April 08, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Oh Tinky...this ones for you...a playground for the mind...so to speak. LOL
Hugs, lurve ya girlie.
Span the distances, stand the length of time,
Geography, a measurement, or a pantomime,
Filled with fantasies, echoed pleasantly online,
Spiking heartbeats that exceed the borderline.
Foreplay, a special language, instant message,
Stimulating excitement, destiny with courage,
As the routine boredom becomes truly obsolete,
And stolen time crests, emotionally bittersweet.
Caution, tossed away, discarded in the breeze,
Soft, gentle, caressing words, meant to please,
Commitments, promises made, yet not fulfilled,
A relationship, created, a bond quietly instilled.
Sub-zero, the chill of his breath freezes to ice,
Comments, questions, communication, a device,
That conquers, controls, instigates loving words,
While skilful hands manipulate humming birds.
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I'm with you. (Avril Lavigne lyrics) Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent write, Trish; you amaze me with your poetic prowiness! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Tell me more about this "foreplay."
I've never had cyber-sex.
ROFL...good work, Trish. Glad to see you back in gear.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well Trickster you gave this one the dual treatment as is neccessary!
The net is a true Jeckyll and Hyde, that needs wise minds to tour it!;-)good one!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Cyberspace - truly a magnificent playground for many a mind - but sadly also quite a heartbreaker for some.
A very interesting piece, Trish.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thank you Trish :) a little cyber spanking and lip locking can put a smile on a naughty girls face....even make her marital partner very happy....and boost his ego...to get lifted to higher...you knoiw what...hehehehehe. But when the light flicks back on and back to reality....that aint much fun!!
Love Tinky :P
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
To look at the www, truly has quite the pantomime effect. It's real; but is it? Maybe or maybe not. Almost; yet not quite.
We can chat and interact with those around the world, but when it's turned off (with just a click) it's nothing but a blank dark screen, and a few, neon lights. No promises to meet, flashing back and forth between two virtual, yet real strangers.
Sometimes I wonder if somebody somewhere is going to click a button in their virtual world, and we'll be gone that quickly also.
Scary isn't it?
Its good to see you again Patricia!