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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
4/10/2006 |
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A wonderful, if sad, poem, even on a sunny day!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/9/2006 |
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Heaps of sadness, cut to the bone.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/9/2006 |
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Powerul write Susan!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/8/2006 |
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Susan this poem is outstanding! You wring every emotion and do it with such wondrous internal rhyme,meter and all around beauty of
expression! Splendid soulfullonging!
Hugs,
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
4/8/2006 |
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With deep admiration, I commend your writing this work. Men don't like to admit it, but there are many who tear up and flood the shoulder of a loved woman when things become unbearable. I admit this, proudly, for the reason is usually a deep and personal loss.
Golda Meir once said, "Those who don't know how to weep with their whole heart, don't know how to laugh either."
Our love to you, Bill
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/8/2006 |
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Expressive write about a sadness I think we all feel from time to time.
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/8/2006 |
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Susan,
Powerfully written poem, emotions expressed very well.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by . ignis |
4/8/2006 |
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More often than I care to remember I was flooded by feelings similar to those you used in this powerful poem. Life here and now at times seems an array of agony and misunderstandings. And many more things none of which do anything good to the sensitive mind and heart. We are all here and now because we must learn things, none of us exists in this plane without reason. Teachings of the universe are extended by experience to those unable to perceive fully that what needs to be added to awareness. Our imagination is not yet powerful enough to anticipate all that we actually feel when we are right in the middle of situations. But after we've experienced it we sure know, even if only years after the fact. It is not testing, nor some form of cruelty, but merely the universe's way to teach the ignorant. But when going through this school of hard knocks poems like this one are flowing from the tip of our quill, then we actually have learned a thing or two. Thank you for creating and sharing,
RAge
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
4/8/2006 |
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Susan
This reminded me of the late and great Bob Marley's Redemption Song...
We must always rise above our emotions, to the clear ozone breathing of self belief, and an indomitable faith in the Most High...
When we do, all sadness disappears and dissipates like ice in the sun !
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