|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionately fine, Susan. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|An amazing acounting of nature - in the sky and on mortals' bed.
I grope for words to go on... but you just said all needing to be said. - With envy - Bill
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hey! Susan! Don't hold back, here, let it all out, tell us exactly how you feel. LOL Loved this offering because . . . well, nevermind, I just did. You corraled all of the physical emotions and wrote them in this poem like they had been waiting, just waiting, for a chance to tell everyone how they felt. Takes talent to do this and keep it from sounding like a porno movie. Not to say that porn is ALL bad, did I ever tell you about . . . Better not go there. LOL2|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wow, Susan, this one blew me away! Awesome writing, and that pic is amazing! BRAVA; very well penned!
Saving this beauty!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Love the way you used nature here!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is perfectly executed, and draws the reader in from the first line. The electicity and ozone can be smelled from the very pages as I read it and the passion arising from your loins must be intense for it to manifest itself so well into the written word. Very good Susan...and I love the rainy night.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Fantastic Susan! I love the rhyme and rhythm!Has the limerick lilt,
which you do so well...
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This, my dear, is a StormSpinner's kind of write. I'll go even further, and give you my ultimate compliment: WISH I'D WRITTEN THIS SCORCHER!!!!!! Definately saving, beautifully written and felt; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I love the accompanying pic, too. A StormSpinner's kind. :) All around perfection!