I just want to kiss you.
To lay in your arms
whispering corny things into your throat.
Things like, “I love you.”
I just want to convey every thought,
every nuance of me to you;
from laughing, to crying, to screaming, to pleading.
I just want you to feel me.
Feel me in my mind.
Feel me in my heart.
Feel me feeling you.
I just want your thoughts to glide
to curiosity of what more -
or how far -
or how much further can we go.
I just want to do everything with you.
I just want you to give me everything.
Not those useless material things;
those are not things of value one gives
I mean you.
I want you,
I want you to give me you.
© 2006 Sara Coslett
Image – Spirit of Flight
Artist: Josephine Wall
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|Reviewed by June Thompson
I felt as if these words were my own.. but said so much better
lovely, longing piece!
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
I agree with every line you wrote.
I hope for you he will understand these words and be yours soon.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i admire your straight forward passion in this poem ...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautifully written romance...sigh. If I could be so fortunate!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is so supreme I do not know where to start except by saying I am a little envious of the person you are writing this to. The words are priceless and so rare that they speak volumes. The graphic though gorgeous is unnecessary and is overpowered anyway by the strength of the poem. The best Sara.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An outstanding romantic write Sara
Thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Oh, the longing this so beautifully reflects. I love it~! 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yearning write...lovely passionate and pure straight from the heart!!
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Beautiful. I don't think "I love you" is ever "corny." Thank you for sharing this gift, Sara. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love the poem and the image! Exceptional poem Sara as it voices so easily what you want with no esoteric words or double meanings, just straight out "I want you"! Kudo's!