|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|Stellar. This one blows me away! Write on!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A captivating poem, Dale; I am drawn into the ambiance that you have created via your verses. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Hypnotic and wonderfully creative. This is a poem you can
see, hear, taste, smell, and feel. I.e., r e a l.
Keep 'em comin' !!! 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Reading this poem, one can feel the sense of longing to share these amazing life experiences with someone. Well done CJ.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|How this accords with my own mood this evening, Dale... glorious imagery and scorching sentiment, visualised and articulated in ways that only you can with your cinematic eye. You ought to write screenplay for Jerry Bruckheimer... my fav!!! :))) LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Oh a wistful beauty, Dale. The images burn like that falling star. "Hear the rumble/watch the vision/roll over the mountain", so much meaning in seemingly simple language. This is what makes you a craftsman. But what we feel is what makes this so beautiful!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Fascinating, and quite powerful, Dale.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Dale, you're reaching a new depth with this splendid creative poem...I love the word usage, and imagery is captivating! Bravo!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A word avalanche tumbling down in perfect verse Dale!!
Happy Easter my friend!!