Straps on her sex pistol
shoots those pearl bullets girlfriend's way,
Femme dom's lipstick gay.
tells her the bedroom law,
hot blond sex ranger rides her raw,
Champagne fizzles, drips from
girlfriend's lips, lube the ribbed pistol grips
her senses screaming and numb,
Black plastic torn to shreds
pistol shot through the sugar walls
Femme dom is selective who she beds.
Girlfriend's passive, feels the powder
burn, Femme dom's eating bullets,
shot her load, coming in on a different road.
Femme dom gives her some more,
those slow, deep kisses, making out
on the floor.
These two women are burning,
the heat of passion returning,
so hot, Blue, that's me in the corner writhing and turning.
Erotic Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman
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|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Great sultry/western flare on erotic poetry.|
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Hot write !!! Love it.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Thanks for the smile, but what made me chuckle the most is that you've got an "erotic" copyright. LOL. Great pic and poem, Sage. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you're certainly not shooting blanks in this poem ...|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Another great hot write!|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Awwwww... so many songs here, Darlin... from 10cc's Rubber Bullets to a spot of REM I reckon... and I just love them all! All I can think is Con-doms and Dutch Caps... perhaps that's a female version of a Stetson in some parts, for all I know... Anyways, Sage, your rubber ALWAYS hits the road and gets us seein shades of lavender, especially when you're Blue...!! Gotta luv it, :)) Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Merci pour ce don poétique et sensuel. Amour et paix,
|Reviewed by Rose L
I love your writing because it oozes sensuality and drips with passion, each line turning up the heat! I do so enjoy your creative mind my friend!
Love & Peace,
"Live Simply That Others May Live"
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Phew! is it me, or is it hot in here? the imagery reaches places you really don't wanna here about...I think I'll go lie down now LOL. Just Superb Sage.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Definitely not corn,
No one can of you scorn,
You are the most prolific poet born,
If you ever did quit the write,
I would for one feel most forlorned...ed
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Dang, Sage, I think you melted my computer! LOL Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|"that's me in the corner writhing and turning." gotta love it, Sage, gotta love it. I am imagining that scene. Uh huh, yesssssssss.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
You make the Den sizzle and burn with this red hot poker composition, that would strip the wallpaper from the walls !!
Femme Fatale and Lone Ranger in disguise, you are one hot woman, with a scorching muse...:)
Keep churning out these piledriver pearls !