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Haiku (5/7/5): Orange
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, April 17, 2006
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delicious pleasures
s l o w l y revealed by peeling,
eating an orange

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Founding Editor	1/29/2009

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Reviewed by Carole Mathys	4/18/2006

tasty haiku, Karla... love and peace, Carole




Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	4/17/2006

I can smell it Karla. Nothing like the smell of a fresh orange. Susan




Reviewed by m j hollingshead	4/17/2006

well done




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	4/17/2006

Now you are making me hungry for an Orange LOL. Keep up the great writing and be blessed in doing so GOd Bles Michelle!




Reviewed by Nordette Adams	4/17/2006

Brought a smile and a chuckle to this lady. ~~Nordette




Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	4/17/2006

Small ones are more juicy. Not sure bout oranges though...




Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg	4/17/2006

juicy




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	4/17/2006

Good for senryu too. I can just taste the sweetness.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	4/17/2006

Yummy!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher	4/17/2006

Great ku on the orange fruit! Love, Birgit and Roger




Reviewed by A PAX	4/17/2006

my favorite fruit.......the work makes it worth it :)




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/17/2006

Yes I do have to agree with Ed on this one, the orange is a very provocative fruit, ater peeling away the rind you have no way of knowing until you actually taste whether it will be sweet and juicy or sour and dry. Good poem makes one think. Felix




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	4/17/2006

Could have as well sexual conotations...ed




Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie	4/17/2006

Oh Yes, what a lovely haiku Karla! Reindeer




Reviewed by Safi Abdi	4/17/2006

Love them, and you make them even more appetizing! Safi




Reviewed by Peter Paton	4/17/2006

Karla Very appetising and ap "pealing " pen...lols Love Peter




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	4/17/2006

Excellent, Karla - think I'll have one now!




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	4/17/2006

Wonderful haiku, Karla; very a"peal"ing. grins BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by F William Broome	4/17/2006

Only in the privacy of a bedroom, with a loved partner, would the peeling of an oragnge... be better! Great statement. Great word us. Love it! - Bill

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