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Deal ... Or No Deal?
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, April 17, 2006
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Not about the TV program, but I love that show...LOL!

The hammock, in a relaxing mood,
requests the pleasure
of my company.
It looks at me longingly; it's been
a while since we met;
too long, truth be told.
I recall the gentle rocking motion
as it whispered sleep ...
sleep ... into my ears:
And so, who am I to disappoint?
I have a day off,
and nothing to do.
My friend asks me, "Deal or no deal?"  I
don't hesitate and
come out a winner.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Sherri Smith
Great poem and pic to go with. I know exactly what you are feeling here! I love the sun, and napping on the deck. Perfect weather to do that!
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
What a great invitation! The pic is simply adorable!
Love and hugs, Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Love the photo and the write!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Dear Karla,

I say, accept the invitation from that hammock, whenever it is offered.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
What was the Deal you offered that lovely kitten to get him off that hammock??!!!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
I know just how you feel! Sometimes a day of rest is worth much more than any amount of money!
Unfortunately today will not be that day for me, but I hope if it's what you need, then I wish you lots of beautiful dreams!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Ah hah! A snoozing we shall go. Personally I never liked a hammock, but then, this isn't about me, huh? Cute.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Interesting write and atypical of your usual work but very good, I really like it and I think it would be better as stand alone without the graphic.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Sweet poem and a soft cuddly moment for me this morning.

Thanks Karla!
Love and peace!
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
enjoyed the read, like the photo, kitties is good
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Well done cute pic!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This was way to cute, keep writing and be blessed in doing so
God Bless
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Win or lose, no one can beat a nap in a hammock...ed
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
Awwww...too cute for words, and yet you captured it purrfectly!
Reviewed by J M
A Deal that photo is adorable I liked your peom alot Well done.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

If this were money, you are a winner indeed! You've opened the briefcase to a million dollar write, and the picture is absolutely adorable! Awwwwww! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Now this is REALLY a good deal Karla!;-)lol
Hope you took the cat off firsr...hahaha
Fun write,enjoyed!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Go0d deal, but your always a winner!
Lurves ya!
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