|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The power of the first part is usurped by sum of the second.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A heady concoction and elixir you two alchemists have devised in this steamy and passionate duet...
You work well together as a team....the cohesion is good !
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A sumptious gourmet feast! Another great collab! Kudo's to you both!
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|beautiful structure and sultry words, erotic|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well writ sis!!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Steamy and aptly descriptive poem! Well done!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Naw, don't cut anything out. Go with the flow. Put the pedal to the medal. Pressing skin again skin. All those clichés. Yes.|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Y'all cut that out, now! Hell, I'm almost an old man, and that stuff surely does stir me up... powerfully, ya' know. Have mercy!
It's dang good, and you two are getting better... and wilder. Good writing. Good readilng. Perfection... almost. - Bill